We Thought of You
A poem for our Fanstory Family.85 total reviews
Comment from CAT•FISH²
Kym Jade,
Merry Christmas to you as well! This is such a warm and happy tiding for all during the holidays. I cannot say much for any suggestions, it has a good rhyme scheme and a flowing tempo. The only part that I didn't like was one of the middle lines.
"As LPs of carols, crackle and we think of you with love."
It might just be because I do not know what a "LP" is.
But besides that, well done and merry Christmas.
CAT•FISH²
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Kym Jade,
Merry Christmas to you as well! This is such a warm and happy tiding for all during the holidays. I cannot say much for any suggestions, it has a good rhyme scheme and a flowing tempo. The only part that I didn't like was one of the middle lines.
"As LPs of carols, crackle and we think of you with love."
It might just be because I do not know what a "LP" is.
But besides that, well done and merry Christmas.
CAT•FISH²
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Dear Cat Fish,
Thanks for the wonderful review and help. LP stands for a long playing vinyl record.
Hugs
Kym
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Thank you very much. It makes much more sense now. And you are welcome too.
CAT•FISH²
Comment from Gungalo
I don't know you guys but wanted to say this is a beautiful wish you send out to all your friends. Allow me please to wish you two a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Maybe I'll get to meet you on your return!!! Happy Holidays!!!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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I don't know you guys but wanted to say this is a beautiful wish you send out to all your friends. Allow me please to wish you two a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Maybe I'll get to meet you on your return!!! Happy Holidays!!!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Dear Gungalo,
thanks for the kind review and we hope we do get to become friends on our return.
Best wishes and dreams
Kym
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That's a good thing. Good luck to you both through the holidays!!! See ya when ......
Comment from lisasolorio1
That is a very nice christmas poem. It is touching and warmth radiates from it. Have a Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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That is a very nice christmas poem. It is touching and warmth radiates from it. Have a Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Dear Lisa...
We are so please you were touched by our humble words. Thanks for the kind wishes.
Best wishes and dreams
Kym
Comment from adewpearl
Kym and Jade - how lovely to hear from you - what a gracious Christmas greeting, and I certainly look forward to your return after the new year - smiling at you and wishing you a blessed Christmas :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Kym and Jade - how lovely to hear from you - what a gracious Christmas greeting, and I certainly look forward to your return after the new year - smiling at you and wishing you a blessed Christmas :-) Brooke
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Dear Brooke,
It is so lovely to see you again. Thanks for the lovely review and wishes of the season.
Love and hugs
Kym
Comment from Sasha
This is a lovely poem and a beautiful Christmas card and wish from you to all of us. I wish you both the same and look forward to having you back. I enjoyed this very much.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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This is a lovely poem and a beautiful Christmas card and wish from you to all of us. I wish you both the same and look forward to having you back. I enjoyed this very much.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Dear Smurphgirl,
Wonderful to hear from you and will look forward to being back with friends like you.
Best wishes and hugs
Kym