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Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse acrostic poem, Walk with My God, follows the vertical theme and represents an invitation to follow more closely the figure and message of God. Nice.
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This free verse acrostic poem, Walk with My God, follows the vertical theme and represents an invitation to follow more closely the figure and message of God. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Aussie
"Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet." Angels walk with us when we go out walking. Every day in every way, we are not alone. God hears our every prayer. We may not be answered the way we expect, but we will be answered because He loves His children XXK.
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"Some people walk in the rain, others just get wet." Angels walk with us when we go out walking. Every day in every way, we are not alone. God hears our every prayer. We may not be answered the way we expect, but we will be answered because He loves His children XXK.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a stunning photo choice. What a wonderful challenge you gave yourself: write a free verse. Your title, "Walk with my God" fits so perfectly for your message in your well-written acrostic poem.
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What a stunning photo choice. What a wonderful challenge you gave yourself: write a free verse. Your title, "Walk with my God" fits so perfectly for your message in your well-written acrostic poem.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ALCREATOR: This posting speaks of walking and talking with our God to find out how we should live here on earth. I've walked and talked with our God. Here is what He said o me: "You shall love, "ME," with all your heart, with all your soul, and with all your mind. This is the first, and great commandment. The second is like it...you shall love your neighbor as yourself. On these two commandments hang all the Law and the Prophets ." MATTHEW chapter 22: and at verses 37-38- 39- and 40. Thank you for sharing, my brother. You are appreciated. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ALCREATOR: This posting speaks of walking and talking with our God to find out how we should live here on earth. I've walked and talked with our God. Here is what He said o me: "You shall love, "ME," with all your heart, with all your soul, and with all your mind. This is the first, and great commandment. The second is like it...you shall love your neighbor as yourself. On these two commandments hang all the Law and the Prophets ." MATTHEW chapter 22: and at verses 37-38- 39- and 40. Thank you for sharing, my brother. You are appreciated. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Beck Fenton
I'm glad to see you are attempting free verse. It's much more demanding than people would think. And to include the acrostic feature is an additional stressor!
I would have liked to have a reference to walking with God (in the third verse) as you included that in the other three verses, but that is my opinion.
Good luck with future free verses!
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I'm glad to see you are attempting free verse. It's much more demanding than people would think. And to include the acrostic feature is an additional stressor!
I would have liked to have a reference to walking with God (in the third verse) as you included that in the other three verses, but that is my opinion.
Good luck with future free verses!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Healing Muse
for your first ever free verse acrostic poem.
May I make a suggestion an example instead of what you did so well
Walk with my God
And know a few more secrets of mortal man's living and a word about His Creations
Learn some more truths about needs, ends, purposes of life and birth and death of man
Knowledge of learning living a life in one life is not enough; let God teach us something more
Note the separation with a space that I gave above and continue to doing so with the rest of your free verse.
Gert
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Smiles to you Healing Muse
for your first ever free verse acrostic poem.
May I make a suggestion an example instead of what you did so well
Walk with my God
And know a few more secrets of mortal man's living and a word about His Creations
Learn some more truths about needs, ends, purposes of life and birth and death of man
Knowledge of learning living a life in one life is not enough; let God teach us something more
Note the separation with a space that I gave above and continue to doing so with the rest of your free verse.
Gert
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: I'm sure that Jesus is saying, "well written, my poet, friend!"
I like how you witness to the world about walking with our God.
King David wanted to tell God that he values his connection and inheritance
and sang him praises. Psalm 16 and 23.
We learn more when we spend time together with our creator. Keep
shining a great light...Isaiah 9 to others. I'm doing the same. God bless.
flylikeaneagle - nancy
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Alcreator: I'm sure that Jesus is saying, "well written, my poet, friend!"
I like how you witness to the world about walking with our God.
King David wanted to tell God that he values his connection and inheritance
and sang him praises. Psalm 16 and 23.
We learn more when we spend time together with our creator. Keep
shining a great light...Isaiah 9 to others. I'm doing the same. God bless.
flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Congratulations on your first ever free verse acrostic poem. I do love your theme because I'm a believer, but think that it could use a little more emotion in it. Maybe a few lines that include your personal testimony? I really like the repeating lines "Walk with my God". Good job.
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Congratulations on your first ever free verse acrostic poem. I do love your theme because I'm a believer, but think that it could use a little more emotion in it. Maybe a few lines that include your personal testimony? I really like the repeating lines "Walk with my God". Good job.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from mrsmajor
God is all knowing, and through His only begotten son Jesus Christ he is the great teacher, sharing with us a way of life that will be pleasing to Him, and of value to all people...Indeed go walking with Almighty God...I found it a bit difficult to recognize the acrostic form in this free verse poem, but I did enjoy the essence of your poem...Thanks for sharing...
Blessings,
Victoria
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God is all knowing, and through His only begotten son Jesus Christ he is the great teacher, sharing with us a way of life that will be pleasing to Him, and of value to all people...Indeed go walking with Almighty God...I found it a bit difficult to recognize the acrostic form in this free verse poem, but I did enjoy the essence of your poem...Thanks for sharing...
Blessings,
Victoria
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very spiritual and glowing with holy reverence and such dynamic photo emphasizing the ways man should act and behave to have better life.WELL DONE. Read mine also right now. lolol liberty justice
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Very spiritual and glowing with holy reverence and such dynamic photo emphasizing the ways man should act and behave to have better life.WELL DONE. Read mine also right now. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
