God Omniscient Deeds
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Comment from victor 66
Your poem is most sophisticated and I do thank you for being very explanatory in your "author's notes". When poetry prompts put specific, limiting criteria into their guidelines, it always makes for an interesting direction in which it takes you. I think you did well. Take care.
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Your poem is most sophisticated and I do thank you for being very explanatory in your "author's notes". When poetry prompts put specific, limiting criteria into their guidelines, it always makes for an interesting direction in which it takes you. I think you did well. Take care.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from Adri7enne
Sounds like a favorite personal dream, A. All writers dream about one day being awarded a prize that proclaims them the best in their field. And if a whisper in God's ear makes that possibility more real, then I'm all for it! Good luck in the contest.
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Sounds like a favorite personal dream, A. All writers dream about one day being awarded a prize that proclaims them the best in their field. And if a whisper in God's ear makes that possibility more real, then I'm all for it! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. I like how the illustration offers a quote that also compliments the story. I count forty words as well, so it appears you have met the criteria for the contest you have entered. Good luck with your contest entry!
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Thank you for sharing. I like how the illustration offers a quote that also compliments the story. I count forty words as well, so it appears you have met the criteria for the contest you have entered. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
This is very unique and I like that very much because you used a completely different writing and format style to anything we've seen before. You matched the contest criteria perfectly but didn't feel bound by rigid rules and still made it very much your own. Good job.
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This is very unique and I like that very much because you used a completely different writing and format style to anything we've seen before. You matched the contest criteria perfectly but didn't feel bound by rigid rules and still made it very much your own. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very cute poem fulfills the prompt well and is quite clever, with the vertical "God". Excellent use of artwork, color and font. I see nothing to correct. Good luck in the contest!
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Very cute poem fulfills the prompt well and is quite clever, with the vertical "God". Excellent use of artwork, color and font. I see nothing to correct. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from fivecardstud1247
it is very will written poem following the format. I can not see anything wrong with it I also google pictures also they are very good. I also think God talks to us if we want listen what he says.
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it is very will written poem following the format. I can not see anything wrong with it I also google pictures also they are very good. I also think God talks to us if we want listen what he says.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from meeshu
well done Alcreator, it is a write that is Orb Prize worthy real or not. I enjoy your eclectic spiritual style and sentiments................meeshu
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well done Alcreator, it is a write that is Orb Prize worthy real or not. I enjoy your eclectic spiritual style and sentiments................meeshu
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from Swampfox1
Your spelling of clamours is wrong , especially if you are doing the British spelling. Your defintion of orb is wrong, it is something circling the earth such as the moon. The word Dais, it means a raised platform. You are correct about whom the prize goes to. It is a nice poem once one has all the words in order in one's head. Thanks for sharing.
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Your spelling of clamours is wrong , especially if you are doing the British spelling. Your defintion of orb is wrong, it is something circling the earth such as the moon. The word Dais, it means a raised platform. You are correct about whom the prize goes to. It is a nice poem once one has all the words in order in one's head. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
It seems you've met all of the requirements and included all of the words you were asked to include, Doc.
And, just as Frank Sinatra once sang in his song, "...you did it your way."
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It seems you've met all of the requirements and included all of the words you were asked to include, Doc.
And, just as Frank Sinatra once sang in his song, "...you did it your way."
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from kahpot
Firstly, thank you for the explanatory notes very helpful, this is a wonderful read and I love the format, and the message that dreams can live on and be accomplished, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Firstly, thank you for the explanatory notes very helpful, this is a wonderful read and I love the format, and the message that dreams can live on and be accomplished, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
