Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I like this; kind of in the moment, refreshing and full of renewal
Very nicely selected image to support the poem
Utilising 'love' as a verb to begin is very inviting; almost makes you agree with sentiments about early morning (except for those challenged by rising with enthusiasm)
Your second line borders on the philosophical as you use he image of hope as the purpose of this heralding early light; a herald of mercy for new opportunities to start again
Well conceived, well composed. Best of luck with this.

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks so much Mark, as always for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

Traditionally, original Japanese Haiku have a Buddhist influence and reveals our mystical relationship to nature and the universe. Even in the west there should be a sense of mystery and the uncanny. I like your middle line. The other two lines are too predictable. The first line is almost redundant. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks so much, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The slugabeds don't know what they're missing. Very pleasant little 5-7-5 to accompany stunning photo. I have just one question: why "mercy"? The idea of dawn as a herald is well established in literature and i can understand the concept of hope ion connection with the dawn. I'd love to know why and how in your mind "mercy" becomes involved

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Hope + new beginnings + new day, I would say a new opportunity, is merciful wouldn't you? You don't have to be critical, critique can mean encouragement as well! And aren't we all in the same game? Thanks for the review, blessings, Roy.

Comment from scd41

Excellent

For the spiritually inclined and even others, early morning hours have a mystic beauty. Even life coaches suggest to try to spend nicely the morning hours so as to be in an optimistic mindframe for the whole day. Your 5-7-5 'Early morning' poem with the stunning picture underscores the above point.

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks so much, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from misscookie

Exceptional

You captured my attention from the start.
I fell in love with the photo what a to start a day with the Lord and what He created..
Your words were perfect for the poem

Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks so much Cookie, for this wonderfully supportive review, lovely comments, and exceptional rating and stars, blessings,

reply by misscookie on 07-May-2015

You're very welcome.
Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

This is a super little 5-7-5 that you have composed here. It id needless to say that the syllable count is hundred percent correct. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks so much Chris, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Delahay

Excellent

I don't know if the dawning of a new day heralds mercy but it can hold promise of a new day and hope that things can be better than the previous.

 Comment Written 05-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

The bible scriptures say so! thanks for the great review,

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Anon. This form is well above my capabilities but you can do it well. The picture compliments it beautifully. I've always been an early riser, once the sun is up I'm up, so this little one has a lot of meaning for me. Good luck in the contest, Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

Thanks mate, for the great review and comments.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful photograph that goes well with your poem.
-You follow the directions in the prompt.
-Very nice first line that introduces the poem.
-Line two is very good and the use of "dawning" is a good choice, as the day is dawning, as well as hope.
-Good conclusion.

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

Thanks for the great review and comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-May-2015

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You have written an excellent 5-7-5 poem
The syllable count is spot on.
Very nice third line reflection
Great photograph to poem match
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 04-May-2015

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reply by the author on 05-May-2015

Thanks for well wishes and great review,