Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

This is a pretty well-penned spiritual poem;
I don't feel the poem needs any alterations;
"whisper in the breeze":
"through the sweet cardinal song";
The good Lord speaks to us in many soft ways; it is not difficult to take note of his loving presence.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much:)

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is an eloquent piece of poetic art! listen to god's voice and follow him through your life and you will find peace and happiness.
thank you for sharing, dear teresa!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you rebekka. I've been going to a discipleship school held one day a month. I'm really learning how to listen to God. It's been amazing:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you rebekka. I've been going to a discipleship school held one day a month. I'm really learning how to listen to God. It's been amazing:)

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Whisper, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem, very nice rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport,

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you Lakeport:) Blessing to you.

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you Lakeport:) Blessing to you.

reply by lakeport on 22-Nov-2014

you are welcome,Hugs!lakeport.

reply by lakeport on 22-Nov-2014

you are welcome.Hugs!lakeport.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Teresa, this has such a graceful quality to it. At some points so gentle like a love poem that holds so much tender awareness of heart. No matter what that love is for. I really enjoyed this one, it's softness spoke to me more deeply because of its tenderness.
Really well penned post my friend.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Maureen:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Maureen:)

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi Teresa this is a lovely little piece of spiritual poetry. You have used some gorgeous imagery in this such as through the sweet cardinal song
or the flight of a butterfly
Well done.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you Wendy:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you Wendy:)