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Nobody Knows When a Giggle Will Grow

a children's poem in rhyme

137 total reviews 
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Miranda continues to provide excellent shots of Sawyer and his fantastic facial expressions. I love the reflection in the spoon. It is quite evident a giggle is being conceived at that very moment.
A delightful read Brooke,
:-)Carolyn

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Carolyn, thank you so much :-) I just love my daughter's photography :-) Brooke
reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 20-Nov-2014
    So do I....
Comment from Zue65
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Oh yes, I've been into that situation before, this is a familiar terrain for me and I, oh so, enjoyed your poem. And the bonus is, aside from tickling my funny bones, you did it in rhymes. Thanks for sharing Brooke.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Thank you, nassus, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from tdragonfly
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Giggles are contagious to say the least. hat is like trying to make a owl full of jelly stop shaking while riding on a locomotive. It is had not to get tickled when ever one else does.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    tdragonfly, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
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Too bad, but very true. Giggles are contagious and they spread easily. A smile, a joke or even a silly thought and bring them rushing to the surface. But we feel so much better when we let them out. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    lancellot, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from donaldcolson
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Charming work about the childhood contagion of thew giggles. Brings back memories of my own childhood, particularly times with my 3 years younger sister don

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Donald, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
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HI Brooke, he looks like he is having all kinds of fun...and you don't know when you just have to laugh...and you can't hold it back...I love you poem...made my smile...very well written...and the picture is precious...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Linda, thanks so much :-) Brooke
reply by l.raven on 19-Nov-2014
    you are so welcome Brooke...xxoo
Comment from Willowsong
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This is a very cute poem and I even found myself starting with a grin at the beginning and feeling it grow into a giggle by the end. I absolutely love the photo used to compliment this piece...he's a treasure for sure :)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Willowsong, thank you so much :-) Brooke
reply by Willowsong on 21-Nov-2014
    You are most certainly welcome :)
Comment from rjuselius
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this would've been a brilliant entry to the children poem writing prompt! although winning is not always the goal but getting feedback may prove much better:)
thank you for sharing, dear brooke!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
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Brooke, This is just as cute as all your Sawyer poems. He's a sweet boy. My first thought was that Miranda must carry her camera with her everywhere, even to the dinner table! Ha. It must be a real silver spoon to get such a great reflection. So cute. Carole

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    Carole, thank you so much :-) She has a good camera, but most of the candid shots of Sawyer are taken with her smart phone, which yes, she carries everywhere :-) Brooke
Comment from seaglass
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That is one shinning spoon and a great photo of the reflection. Giggles are definitely well defined in this poem. Most times I ever got into trouble as a child started with a giggle.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
    seaglass, thank you so much :-) Brooke