Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

I love seeing your titles and knowing one of your counting poems is on the way. I really enjoyed your worm minus one poem, Brooke. The examples are each fun to read.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Karyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Michaelk

Excellent

This reminds me of the 'Ten little Indians' song I used to sing as a kid. Those worms surly were an intrepid bunch. I had no idea they were so active. A great kids poem. Your rhyme was great and your rhythm flowed very smoothly. This is something I would read to my kids. Great job.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Michael, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Brooke, poor little worms...this is very well written...and has a good smooth read to it...pretty much covers the lives of a worm...LOL...great rhythm and rhyme...and a great picture...love it...boy is Sawyer ever growing up...smiles...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thank you, Linda, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 07-Nov-2014

you are always so welcome Brooke...luff xxoo

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Brooke,

Lucky bird, but poor worms! Fun little read.

I used to go out with my dad at night when we live in Ohio and help catch night crawlers so we could go fishing the next day. Interesting little critters. And I even bated my own hook. Taking the fish off the line, well, that was a whole new ball game--especially catfish!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, Jax :-) Brooke

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Virtual "six"... Love this chilldrens counting poem. I would have never, ever thought of doing one like this. I have bookmarked this one for future reference so I can try one as soon as possible. Extremely creative, indeed! God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Deb, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from tdragonfly

Excellent

Cute little poem for the kids. Also helps with counting backwards. The poem did not flow as well as yours usually do. But I still liked it.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

tdragonfly, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Kids just love these types of poems, & it is such a good learning tool..And Must admit this was even a good read for myself, & got a chuckle, & then, started feeling sorry for
these worms, as they seemed so human, & then just one measly worm left all by his lonesome.

Caressa

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Caressa, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

What a fun, inventive piece you have so masterfully crafted Brooke. I enjoyed this piece throughout its entirety and the artwork is delightful. God bless!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thank you so much, Neonewman :-) B rooke

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

A delightful child's poem. I especially like the one that was gotten by the robin. Here in the desert we don't have many worms come out in the rain.
Blessings Pat

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Pat, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Brooke,

It seems these worms have something in common with spiders.
(LOL) Maybe it would be better if they went out in larger groups. Excellent rhyming and flow. The worm that got stomped on must have been a senior.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

thanks so much for the laugh and the review, Winslow :-) Brooke