Discover Your Real Status
Who tells your real status? A Non-Fiction in a few words.91 total reviews
Comment from dennis0530
Ah, yes... who is there to best judge you but your closest near and dear.
Of course, it also depends on how and what you tip the "judge." They say that everybody have their price - concluding what is the prize. The professional wife can only offer a non-biased judgement depending on how she herself is judged.
Let us just hope that her frank thoughts favor us.
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Ah, yes... who is there to best judge you but your closest near and dear.
Of course, it also depends on how and what you tip the "judge." They say that everybody have their price - concluding what is the prize. The professional wife can only offer a non-biased judgement depending on how she herself is judged.
Let us just hope that her frank thoughts favor us.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
Comment from The Death
Hi,
It is true that someone close to us can judge us better than others when we are not in good condition. To gain confidence and be ourselves again, they can surely help. You did an excellent work!
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Hi,
It is true that someone close to us can judge us better than others when we are not in good condition. To gain confidence and be ourselves again, they can surely help. You did an excellent work!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
Comment from tbacha58
Enthusiastically, discover a real person in you by her frank thoughts, secretly.
I am sure no-one ever thought about it. I think you are right. Its a great idea. T.
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Enthusiastically, discover a real person in you by her frank thoughts, secretly.
I am sure no-one ever thought about it. I think you are right. Its a great idea. T.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a short and interesting read, alcreator, you did a good job intriguing the reader about the way to find out your position in life. i enjoyed reading this one..
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this is a short and interesting read, alcreator, you did a good job intriguing the reader about the way to find out your position in life. i enjoyed reading this one..
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
Comment from adewpearl
I'm not sure what you're saying - this essay is only directed to men, since they have wives, and it's only directed to men married to non-professional women?
This one has me totally confused. Brooke
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I'm not sure what you're saying - this essay is only directed to men, since they have wives, and it's only directed to men married to non-professional women?
This one has me totally confused. Brooke
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
Comment from Selina Stambi
Another interesting exhortation from you, Al. How wonderful if more men would take note of your advice!
Spags:
about what you (are) actually.... reads better.
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Another interesting exhortation from you, Al. How wonderful if more men would take note of your advice!
Spags:
about what you (are) actually.... reads better.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
Comment from JLPuckett
I just reviewed another one of your pieces and I definitely see a pattern. I would consider these to be more poetry than fiction. But that's completely your call obviously.
I like this one better than the previous one. It speaks to finding yourself in the way your significant other sees you, which is a very interesting idea. The only issue I had with this was the ending of the second paragraph. "you're actually" felt like a really awkward way to end that.
Overall, nice work. This style might be starting to grow on me.
-J.
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I just reviewed another one of your pieces and I definitely see a pattern. I would consider these to be more poetry than fiction. But that's completely your call obviously.
I like this one better than the previous one. It speaks to finding yourself in the way your significant other sees you, which is a very interesting idea. The only issue I had with this was the ending of the second paragraph. "you're actually" felt like a really awkward way to end that.
Overall, nice work. This style might be starting to grow on me.
-J.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
Comment from vapros
Alcreator, there is a bit of wisdom in your advice, but what you recommend would not work for everyone. For those who might benefit, you have laid it out plainly.
I might observe that your posts are rapidly getting better, and pleasant to read. It wasn't always that way. Best of luck as you write.
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Alcreator, there is a bit of wisdom in your advice, but what you recommend would not work for everyone. For those who might benefit, you have laid it out plainly.
I might observe that your posts are rapidly getting better, and pleasant to read. It wasn't always that way. Best of luck as you write.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
Comment from elchupakabra
This is a great short piece. Really captures the whole, behind every great man there's a great woman spirit. This is a perfect example of short, sweet and to the point. Great work on this piece, thanks for sharing.
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This is a great short piece. Really captures the whole, behind every great man there's a great woman spirit. This is a perfect example of short, sweet and to the point. Great work on this piece, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
Comment from denhagan
This was an interesting short story to read, written in a poetic form, about a good way of finding out about your true status and position in life from your wife.
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This was an interesting short story to read, written in a poetic form, about a good way of finding out about your true status and position in life from your wife.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
