Lake Of Dreams
Crown of Sonnets182 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
Wow! That is really impressive. You obviously have complete command of the style as well as the lyrical element. Beautifully crafted. Wonderfully interlinked . I am in awe. Pure genius shine through!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Wow! That is really impressive. You obviously have complete command of the style as well as the lyrical element. Beautifully crafted. Wonderfully interlinked . I am in awe. Pure genius shine through!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much Treischel from both Nathan and I for a gorgeous review of this Crown of Sonnets.
Comment from jjstar
I started reading this last week, I think and couldn't finish. I had had a very bad day, and was cursing you for the beauty and happiness this sonnet portrayed.
Obviously, I'm not so spun up now, so I finished reading...the spirit and joy in the love you have is profound, the imagery makes me want to weep for your joy.
So, well done, and good luck in the contest. If I had a six I'd give it to you.:)
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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I started reading this last week, I think and couldn't finish. I had had a very bad day, and was cursing you for the beauty and happiness this sonnet portrayed.
Obviously, I'm not so spun up now, so I finished reading...the spirit and joy in the love you have is profound, the imagery makes me want to weep for your joy.
So, well done, and good luck in the contest. If I had a six I'd give it to you.:)
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Oh thanks ever so much JJ and especially for being honest about how you read it.
Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow. I always admire anyone who has the talent to pull of a sonnet correctly, let alone a crow. Fantastic write Gungalo. Without a doubt the best one I've read for 'Poem of the month.' You'll be getting my vote once I finish with this. Excellent artwork you chose to accompany it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Again, outstanding write. Have a great night, G. /Ron
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Wow. I always admire anyone who has the talent to pull of a sonnet correctly, let alone a crow. Fantastic write Gungalo. Without a doubt the best one I've read for 'Poem of the month.' You'll be getting my vote once I finish with this. Excellent artwork you chose to accompany it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Again, outstanding write. Have a great night, G. /Ron
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thanks so very much Dragon for you support on this one. We found it was so easy to do and really enjoyed writing it. I'm sure Nathan will be happy when he sees your review too.
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Glad to see you're in the lead. I'm pretty sure you'll win it. This will be a hard one to beat. ;)
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Thank you so much. Sigh.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Unbelievably beautiful and worthy of the title POM. This one gets my vote for you are the personification of romance and style. Well done my friend and good luck. xoxo d
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Unbelievably beautiful and worthy of the title POM. This one gets my vote for you are the personification of romance and style. Well done my friend and good luck. xoxo d
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Oh wow Kiwi. Thank you so very much for a super review on this one. Nathan and I both can't thanks you enough. Wonderful.
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. It was love that made your world perfect. It followed you through many different worlds. Each world was perfect because you had your love right beside you. Great work.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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I love the poem. It was love that made your world perfect. It followed you through many different worlds. Each world was perfect because you had your love right beside you. Great work.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Oh thanks Ellie for a wonderful review of this one. It was easy to write and we have so much meaning in it.
Comment from PedrosA5LeggedDonkey
At first I asked if I was reading an Artemus poem! Then I saw all the "sighs" and went AWWW YEEEAH KEN KEEP READING. Breast, breath, passion, fire, wind me up and I'm spinnin' like Taz. It's a lovely piece of work aside from my comedic remarks. With easy flow of thought and great visuals making me take my time and enjoy it.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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At first I asked if I was reading an Artemus poem! Then I saw all the "sighs" and went AWWW YEEEAH KEN KEEP READING. Breast, breath, passion, fire, wind me up and I'm spinnin' like Taz. It's a lovely piece of work aside from my comedic remarks. With easy flow of thought and great visuals making me take my time and enjoy it.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much from Nathan and I for a beautiful review.
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It's beautiful, not my review. Your welcome
Comment from Jen Gentry
Whoa! Sucked the breath from my body maybe even my soul. SO very touching. You get a big six for this. Holy cow what a poem.
Jenny
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Whoa! Sucked the breath from my body maybe even my soul. SO very touching. You get a big six for this. Holy cow what a poem.
Jenny
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Whoa!! Jenny, Nathan and I say thanks to you for your wonderful and excited review. Wow, girl.
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You guys are very welcome :0)
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Sigh thanks.
Comment from fairy77
This is wonderful but lengthy.Put on one or two perhaps!I liked finest times of so desire and vast expanse of violet sky.You both did a great job!Well done!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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This is wonderful but lengthy.Put on one or two perhaps!I liked finest times of so desire and vast expanse of violet sky.You both did a great job!Well done!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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We thank you ever so much Beth for this fine review.
Comment from elgone
Quite and ambitious undertaking, but you were up to it and executed finely. Your fingerprints are all over the world you jointly penned. Nicely done enjoyable read.
E
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Quite and ambitious undertaking, but you were up to it and executed finely. Your fingerprints are all over the world you jointly penned. Nicely done enjoyable read.
E
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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THanks so much from both of us El What a wonderful review.
Comment from Rembrandt
Exquisite romance and lovely tenderness. A wonderful example of the possible roundelay of sonnets. Loved your alliteration and metaphors. Structure was solidly correct and delightful to smoothly glide through. BRAVO!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Exquisite romance and lovely tenderness. A wonderful example of the possible roundelay of sonnets. Loved your alliteration and metaphors. Structure was solidly correct and delightful to smoothly glide through. BRAVO!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Nathan and I say thanks for you beautiful review of this one Rembrandt.
