Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Part Two Chapter One"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Philip Shin
The life is full of painful and it is shortly the lonely mind. Nobody helps and understand why I have to overcome it.The same word hurt me like I di something wrong. A lot of situation is the same plot to hurt me and that is lonely heart without the love. The short talking hurt me even it is not so trouble. So to overcome it, we need to ignore it as it is gone somewhere away. The childish happening is not seems trouble though but the simple affair is hurting my mind, too.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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The life is full of painful and it is shortly the lonely mind. Nobody helps and understand why I have to overcome it.The same word hurt me like I di something wrong. A lot of situation is the same plot to hurt me and that is lonely heart without the love. The short talking hurt me even it is not so trouble. So to overcome it, we need to ignore it as it is gone somewhere away. The childish happening is not seems trouble though but the simple affair is hurting my mind, too.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh boy, this is the beginning of a relationship that is either going to be perfect or more of the same. Seems this guy has reasons to want to help but are they for real? Guess we shall see eh?
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Oh boy, this is the beginning of a relationship that is either going to be perfect or more of the same. Seems this guy has reasons to want to help but are they for real? Guess we shall see eh?
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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We shall see. Thank you for your kind review.
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A great story is unfolding here you!!!
Comment from Allezw2
lady barbara.wilkey,
Some folk simply trust too much and walk into the most searing of circumstance. Often again and again.
Sort of like individuals using hammers to hit themselves in the head and complaining, not realizing they only have to stop the action to relieve the discomfort.
A prelude to disaster?
From the frying pan into the fire?
Nicely done, with careful details well integrated into a story line.
Fantasist
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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lady barbara.wilkey,
Some folk simply trust too much and walk into the most searing of circumstance. Often again and again.
Sort of like individuals using hammers to hit themselves in the head and complaining, not realizing they only have to stop the action to relieve the discomfort.
A prelude to disaster?
From the frying pan into the fire?
Nicely done, with careful details well integrated into a story line.
Fantasist
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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The pleasure is mine.
Comment from swosugrad09
What an intriguing story! I hope they hit it off and can help each other. Abuse should never control ones life. Thanks for sharing this story.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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What an intriguing story! I hope they hit it off and can help each other. Abuse should never control ones life. Thanks for sharing this story.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from MissMerri
You tell this story in such a compelling way, it is absolutely impossible not to keep reading. That's a very good sign. I thought your depiction of Troy was exceptionally well done. This short paragraph tells us so much about what kind of a person he really is: ""These are bruises." He pointed to the marks. "I won't pry, but I do care." After watching for a reaction, he whispered, "Is that why you're reading up on divorce?"" I'm surprised Anna still has doubts about "what he really wants" after their talk, but maybe because she's been so hurt by a man she trusted, she is a bit paranoid. I look forward to the next chapter. This is intriguing.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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You tell this story in such a compelling way, it is absolutely impossible not to keep reading. That's a very good sign. I thought your depiction of Troy was exceptionally well done. This short paragraph tells us so much about what kind of a person he really is: ""These are bruises." He pointed to the marks. "I won't pry, but I do care." After watching for a reaction, he whispered, "Is that why you're reading up on divorce?"" I'm surprised Anna still has doubts about "what he really wants" after their talk, but maybe because she's been so hurt by a man she trusted, she is a bit paranoid. I look forward to the next chapter. This is intriguing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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I think Anna is questioning her ability to decide if a man is decent or not. Her track record isn't good.
Comment from Nanashirley
I like this story so far. I like your style and the way you have found your niche. I am still looking for mine. I have to say I am enjoying writing the smut book. It is a stretch for me but I do shock those who know me.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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I like this story so far. I like your style and the way you have found your niche. I am still looking for mine. I have to say I am enjoying writing the smut book. It is a stretch for me but I do shock those who know me.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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I am sure your friends are shocked with your present novel. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Intrigue, intrigue, intrigue. You know I am going to follow this story. I've lived through a divorce and I don't think that people who haven't can really, truly, understand. I will follow the story. Of course, you could write about the history of dirt and I'd be your biggest fan! Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Intrigue, intrigue, intrigue. You know I am going to follow this story. I've lived through a divorce and I don't think that people who haven't can really, truly, understand. I will follow the story. Of course, you could write about the history of dirt and I'd be your biggest fan! Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your sweet gentlemanness, I am not sure that's a word, but I just decided it is. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
Trroy definitely does sound like a knight in shining armour come to rescue the damsel in distress. He certainly has the background to understand what she's going through. Great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Trroy definitely does sound like a knight in shining armour come to rescue the damsel in distress. He certainly has the background to understand what she's going through. Great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lola29
I would say Anna is receiving 'divine intervention.' I hope she doesn't allow her fear to dissuade her from taking Troy's help. This was an excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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I would say Anna is receiving 'divine intervention.' I hope she doesn't allow her fear to dissuade her from taking Troy's help. This was an excellent chapter.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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In the next post, Anna has an opportunity for help. We'll see if she accepts it. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Realist101
Hi Barb! I have that happen at times...it's very aggravating too. But it seems your work went thru? Your characters are always real to me and I easily 'feel' the emotions you convey too. This girl is scared of a realationship and I don't blame her! It's hard to trust anyone nowadays. Nice work Barbara. I hope you are doing well!! xoxo, susan ps...one typo? In the sentence starting with "Anna opened her eyes..." you end this with simply "I'm"? Seems unfinished?
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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Hi Barb! I have that happen at times...it's very aggravating too. But it seems your work went thru? Your characters are always real to me and I easily 'feel' the emotions you convey too. This girl is scared of a realationship and I don't blame her! It's hard to trust anyone nowadays. Nice work Barbara. I hope you are doing well!! xoxo, susan ps...one typo? In the sentence starting with "Anna opened her eyes..." you end this with simply "I'm"? Seems unfinished?
Comment Written 13-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2011
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I will recheck that area. I am wondering if the next sentence doesn't have Troy interrupting her. Thank you for your kind review.
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Hi again! I think you just need a word such as "dead" "I'm dead" or something? It does need a word there! ") HUG! Susan
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You are probably right.
