The 23rd Psalm
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Comment from Paulpl52
This is a beautifully crafted expression on psalm 23. The power of Gods word knows no limits and this has inspired you to write with joy and expectation in your heart. Well done, Paul.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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This is a beautifully crafted expression on psalm 23. The power of Gods word knows no limits and this has inspired you to write with joy and expectation in your heart. Well done, Paul.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you Paul for reading my work.
Comment from RKagan
I believe as a writer that writing saves us in many ways. It helps us to express what we cannot say. It also helps us to bring a part of ourselves to the world. This is an excellent, well written explaination of why we write.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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I believe as a writer that writing saves us in many ways. It helps us to express what we cannot say. It also helps us to bring a part of ourselves to the world. This is an excellent, well written explaination of why we write.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you RKagan for writing such a beautiful interpretation to my work!
Comment from Valkarie
This is a wonderful poem your words are so poignant and true and along with your vocabulary it makes the piece a sensational write. I'm not one for comenting on God but I'm sure readers will find this a wonderful poem to relate to. he complexity of your writing is so creative. An impeccable write.
Valkareie...
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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This is a wonderful poem your words are so poignant and true and along with your vocabulary it makes the piece a sensational write. I'm not one for comenting on God but I'm sure readers will find this a wonderful poem to relate to. he complexity of your writing is so creative. An impeccable write.
Valkareie...
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2010
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Thank you Valkarie. Your review seems to elevate my writing to another level. What a great gift you have to make someone feel special. GOD Bless!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Author,
I can't think of a better reason to write poetry than the one you speak of in this thoughtful write. You have given the Lord credit for the gift of writing poetry. This is very beautiful. Good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Hi Author,
I can't think of a better reason to write poetry than the one you speak of in this thoughtful write. You have given the Lord credit for the gift of writing poetry. This is very beautiful. Good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Thank you chey for your so beautiful thoughts regarding this work.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful essay on why you write poetry, it is filled with imagery and emotion, beautiful words that express your desire to write, written in a style different than the others and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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this is a beautiful essay on why you write poetry, it is filled with imagery and emotion, beautiful words that express your desire to write, written in a style different than the others and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Thank you sweet for reading and commenting in this work.
Comment from krdeering
What an intriguing, bi-level "take" on the prompt. It's densely written, a form of prose poetry, with an exalted tone that would be hard to sustain for very long. But since it's modeled on a relatively short psalm, it's not only easier to follow, section by section, but also mercifully finite.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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What an intriguing, bi-level "take" on the prompt. It's densely written, a form of prose poetry, with an exalted tone that would be hard to sustain for very long. But since it's modeled on a relatively short psalm, it's not only easier to follow, section by section, but also mercifully finite.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Thank you fo much for your great review, and for the "mercifully finite." Great line.
Comment from JW
First and foremost, good luck in the contest. Your story, though short, was well written and quite unique. I had never thought about writing poetry, short stories, or novels as an Psalm 23 experience. Yet, I do have to admit, I can tell when I'm being assisted via the Holy Ghost or Heavenly Father.
Thanks for sharing this. Jonathon
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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First and foremost, good luck in the contest. Your story, though short, was well written and quite unique. I had never thought about writing poetry, short stories, or novels as an Psalm 23 experience. Yet, I do have to admit, I can tell when I'm being assisted via the Holy Ghost or Heavenly Father.
Thanks for sharing this. Jonathon
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Thank you Jonathon for understanding so well these thoughts of mine.
Comment from adewpearl
This is a beautifully thoughtful explanation of the spiritual inspiration that motivates you to write and fills you with God's grace as you put pen to paper. Brooke
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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This is a beautifully thoughtful explanation of the spiritual inspiration that motivates you to write and fills you with God's grace as you put pen to paper. Brooke
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Thank you Brooke for been my first reviewer, kind and accepting. Thanks!
