Wee Fairies Flitted Through the Sky
a fantasy80 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
How magical! This poem is totally delightful
and tells me that you are a lover of nature.
Just the fact that you were aware of the
beautiful creatures we have in our world
tells me you are "alive" and well.
Wonderful poem,and the artwork brought
it all to life. Great job!
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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How magical! This poem is totally delightful
and tells me that you are a lover of nature.
Just the fact that you were aware of the
beautiful creatures we have in our world
tells me you are "alive" and well.
Wonderful poem,and the artwork brought
it all to life. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you, Mamonia, for your most gracious review, and yes, I do love nature :-) Brooke
Comment from bohemiangeek
Your poem was whimsical and your words gave a fun description. This is wonderful analogy when we come across something or someone, who does an act,which makes us smile. It's a special treat like your poem.
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Your poem was whimsical and your words gave a fun description. This is wonderful analogy when we come across something or someone, who does an act,which makes us smile. It's a special treat like your poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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thank you, bohemiangeek. I'm so glad you enjoyed the whimsy :-) Brooke
Comment from percival86jack
Have you been smoking those funny cigarettes again Brooke??? LOL Delightful little offering though in all seriousness my friend... hugs and happy stuff, Jackles xxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Have you been smoking those funny cigarettes again Brooke??? LOL Delightful little offering though in all seriousness my friend... hugs and happy stuff, Jackles xxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you, Jack - even when I was a teenager in the 60's where those funny cigarettes were passed in a circle at parties, I just passed them on - never saw the point of the stuff. :-) Brooke :-)
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Me too!
Comment from ceasar
Smooth ryhme, very cute and rata-tat-tat. I can hear the tamborine beat. The fairies playful nature and mystique bring out the realism. I liked this alot.
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Smooth ryhme, very cute and rata-tat-tat. I can hear the tamborine beat. The fairies playful nature and mystique bring out the realism. I liked this alot.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
Comment from bayoupoet
This is a cute and well written poem with magical imagery and emotion. It is delightful to read and a pleasure to read for you, Brooke!
sandra
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2010
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This is a cute and well written poem with magical imagery and emotion. It is delightful to read and a pleasure to read for you, Brooke!
sandra
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Sandra - cute is exactly what I was going for :-) Brooke
Comment from Mariea
Brooke, what an absolutely gorgeous piece. I'm still a kid and heart and love fairy tales (2nd childhood?)
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2010
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Brooke, what an absolutely gorgeous piece. I'm still a kid and heart and love fairy tales (2nd childhood?)
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2010
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Thank you, Mia - my daughter is the world's biggest fairy fan and is about to turn 28 - I don't think she'll ever outgrow them :-) Brooke
Comment from laren
This is a wonderful fantasy poem which tell us about the magic we can find if only we learn to see with the eyes of soul. As always very well written, also the artwork you choose is perfect!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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This is a wonderful fantasy poem which tell us about the magic we can find if only we learn to see with the eyes of soul. As always very well written, also the artwork you choose is perfect!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you, Laren. I always appreciate your thoughtful, encouraging comments :-) Brooke
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Thank you, I really enjoyed your poem.
Have a nice day,
Laren
Comment from Trybuck
Fairies must really be out and about today. Fairy stories and fairy poems, they're everywhere. One would think there are enough real things to write about without having to make up a fairy tale :)
Well done with yours , Buck
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2010
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Fairies must really be out and about today. Fairy stories and fairy poems, they're everywhere. One would think there are enough real things to write about without having to make up a fairy tale :)
Well done with yours , Buck
Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2010
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I take it you're not a big fairy fan? LOL That's OK, you and Amicus can join a fairy hate club. LOLOL My daughter loves fairies, collects fairy figurines and all sorts of other objects, sports fairy tattoos, wears fairy tee shirts, and she is always going to win out with me. ;-) Thanks, Buck. Brooke :-)
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I'm not a fan of fairies but am a Brooke fan - Does that help?
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It helps immensely :-D
Comment from Dave M
Brooke,
This is an excellent fantasy poem, a delight to read aloud and without any problems that I could see. I really like your rhyme scheme, a,a,a,a,b,b,b,b,a,a,a,a.
Dave
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reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Brooke,
This is an excellent fantasy poem, a delight to read aloud and without any problems that I could see. I really like your rhyme scheme, a,a,a,a,b,b,b,b,a,a,a,a.
Dave
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thanks so much, Dave - glad you enjoyed the fantasy :-) Brooke
Comment from NightWriter
"Wee Fairies Flitted Through the Sky" is a beautiful poem of fantasy and flight. I felt like I was in the presence of Disney. All that glitter and sparkle. Bravo! Perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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"Wee Fairies Flitted Through the Sky" is a beautiful poem of fantasy and flight. I felt like I was in the presence of Disney. All that glitter and sparkle. Bravo! Perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you, Steve. I love Disney and his fairies :-) Brooke
