Woodland Secrets Part One
a fantasy ottava rima - see author's notes91 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
Your amazing poetry is certainly worth waiting for, dear Brooke. I loved this, and was strongly inclined to award it my last six, but decided to wait to see the rest of the story and rate the whole. (No promises, :) Just have to wait and see. ) So far it is truly outstanding and beautiful. I enjoyed every word!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Your amazing poetry is certainly worth waiting for, dear Brooke. I loved this, and was strongly inclined to award it my last six, but decided to wait to see the rest of the story and rate the whole. (No promises, :) Just have to wait and see. ) So far it is truly outstanding and beautiful. I enjoyed every word!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, MissMerri - I will work on putting up the rest tomorrow :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
As usual, this is very well written with a good rhyming scheme. You have set the stage perfectly. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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As usual, this is very well written with a good rhyming scheme. You have set the stage perfectly. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Charlie, thank you - hope you like the rest when it's done :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from fictionwriter
Oh a fairy wedding, what a discovery you've made. I can't wait to see the secrets revealed. Another wonderful poem, and one is parts. Looking forward to more. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Oh a fairy wedding, what a discovery you've made. I can't wait to see the secrets revealed. Another wonderful poem, and one is parts. Looking forward to more. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, Joy - glad you like it so far! :-) Brooke
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Def six worthy!!! Really wish I had one for your fine piece Love the imagery and this form, which you seem to have down pat! Faeries and woodlands...so magical and beautiful. Look forward to your next insallment! hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Def six worthy!!! Really wish I had one for your fine piece Love the imagery and this form, which you seem to have down pat! Faeries and woodlands...so magical and beautiful. Look forward to your next insallment! hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Susanne, thank you. I appreciate your most generous comments and hope I live up to your expectations in the second segment :-) Brooke
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I am so looking forward to it!!!!
Comment from jaeladarling
Yay, I am SO looking forward to more! What an enchanting story. Fairies on snails - wonderful! You kept in true form with the poem style, and it flows well. Thanks so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009
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Yay, I am SO looking forward to more! What an enchanting story. Fairies on snails - wonderful! You kept in true form with the poem style, and it flows well. Thanks so much for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009
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Thank you so much for this lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from Arkine
Hmmm, a fairy wedding? Well, that could be interesting. I like how their riding snails, gives a good idea of just how tiny these creatures are. ;) Nice job!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Hmmm, a fairy wedding? Well, that could be interesting. I like how their riding snails, gives a good idea of just how tiny these creatures are. ;) Nice job!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, Arkine - in lots of illustrations and those collectible resin figurines they ride snails :-) Brooke
Comment from Peter@Poole
My goodness, you made me see this fairy caravan, so they must exist! Brooke, it's absolutely lovely and I am enjoying studying these two stanzas in ottava rima. Peter
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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My goodness, you made me see this fairy caravan, so they must exist! Brooke, it's absolutely lovely and I am enjoying studying these two stanzas in ottava rima. Peter
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, Peter :-) Now I have to write more stanzas! :-) Brooke
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Yes, so get on with it! I'm sorry, because you're a lady after all.
Comment from sara-beth
I like the idea of posting it in sections, it builds suspense! This is another delightful and whimsical poem, your rythm and meter are perfect, and the imagery is like a film before my eyes......and what a photograph! Beautiful.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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I like the idea of posting it in sections, it builds suspense! This is another delightful and whimsical poem, your rythm and meter are perfect, and the imagery is like a film before my eyes......and what a photograph! Beautiful.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, Sara-beth. Without sections I simply could not have posted today at all :-) Brooke
Comment from pixiemillie
Mum's the word! Love the idea of fairies riding on the backs of snails- -a caravan of them no less- -paints a sweet picture in the mind of the reader. And wouldn't you know you would have spied this while picking bluebells in the dell. Can't leave out those wildflowers.
So well written. A story with an inviting beginning- -wouldn't children love this. A perfect write that begs for illustration.
Thank you, Brooke for your lovely talent. I'll be waiting for the continuation. RoS
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Mum's the word! Love the idea of fairies riding on the backs of snails- -a caravan of them no less- -paints a sweet picture in the mind of the reader. And wouldn't you know you would have spied this while picking bluebells in the dell. Can't leave out those wildflowers.
So well written. A story with an inviting beginning- -wouldn't children love this. A perfect write that begs for illustration.
Thank you, Brooke for your lovely talent. I'll be waiting for the continuation. RoS
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, Rose of Sharon. :-) I hope to have another installment by tomorrow :-) Brooke
Comment from WRITER1
This sounds like a lovely piece so far. I can see the little fairies riding those little slow slugs. This shows a great imagination on your part.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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This sounds like a lovely piece so far. I can see the little fairies riding those little slow slugs. This shows a great imagination on your part.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Thank you, my friend - glad you're enjoying :-) Brooke
