Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Excellent

The poem is very good & so very true especially in this time of need. Correct number of syllables per line. Great picture to go with the Haiku. Wishing you the best of good fortune in the contest. giovanni

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 23-Jan-2020

You are welcome. giovanni

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

What love is greater, with this stanza you offered us the Supreme sacrifice and gift of hope. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Beautiful words in this Haiku. And it is the truth. He laid down His life for us. Thankfully we have a Saviour. I am reading Joshua and so far God is angry with his people because they do not obey. That is why He had to provide a Lamb, who was Jesus, to be slaughtered for us.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

You're absolutely right. What greater love is there. I like the powerful message conveyed in this. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Fonda,
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem with exact syllables
and an excellent message. Haiku is usually about physical nature,
so this might have been better listed under a 5-7-5 contest or a faith contest.
Nevertheless, well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from Aaqib Naeem

Excellent

A good and complete 5-7-5 in my opinion. The words you chose were so simple and yet they managed to convey the whole message clearly! Good choice of the picture-verse as well. Overall a good edition to the contest. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Fonda Little
Your haiku is perfect telling us in only three lines that Jesus
was crucified for all our sins and we should love our neighbors like ourselves.
Gert

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

reply by Gert sherwood on 22-Jan-2020

Hello Fonda Little
you are welcome. Gert

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

Thanks for this beautiful poem! I copied it into my Bible. No love. His love is the foundation for my life, the unbreakable truth that allows move to live each day with joy.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Exceptional

Great piece. Precise and to the point. I was moved and I think many more were also.
The greatest of all love.
I look forward to seeing more of you.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A beautiful faith-filled poem, dear Fonda. Now we have two. What a pleasure to read Christian work. I will fan you now as most of my writing has a component of God and virtue in them, especially my poetry. I write prose, too.

Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in our Lord Jesus Christ,
Sally Law :)

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

reply by Sally Law on 24-Jan-2020

You're awesome, bro. Blessings to you and yours!!
Sal xo