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For a Dream

Kyrielle Sonnet

71 total reviews 
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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A beautiful Sonnet, smooth reading throughout with some wonderful lines.
Our Mother Moon, the nighttime Queen.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Dear YNWA, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this Sonnet and thought it was smooth reading. Thank you for telling me one line in particular that you liked. Thank you for your support of my poetic efforts today.

    Best,
    jeni
Comment from Louise Michelle
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This is so magical and a pleasure to read. I really like the phrase: I bundle moonbeams for a dream.

Another terrific line worth mentioning: Sweet fairies always grace these rays

A very enjoyable poem, Luna.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Dear Louise, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the poem, and grateful that you shared with me a couple of lines that you especially enjoyed. Thank you for your support of my poetic efforts today.

    Best,
    jeni
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Jeni
Well you muse (Luna) certainly knows how to send you thoughts how to write a Kyrielle Sonnet
Treasure and hold your
bundle (of) moonbeams for a dream.

Gert





 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Thank you very much, Gert. Thank you for your support of my poetic efforts today.

    Best,
    jeni
Comment from winnona
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A well-written Kyrielle sonnet. This form of poem seems complicated as I read the rules of the form, but I am sure if I broke it done and wrote a few I would get it. Very well done.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Dear winnona, thank you for your kind review. Yes, I'm sure you could work with this form.and if you ever try I'll be glad to read it. Thank you for your support of my poetic efforts today.

    Best,
    jeni
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Kyrielle Sonnet. It is the only Sonnet I love to write. Our dreams are the only place where we can escape to from time to time.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
    Dear Sandra, I know that you write a lot of Kyrielle Sonnets as well. I was just telling someone about you yesterday! I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem.

    Thank you for your support of my poetic efforts today.

    Best,
    jeni
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Luna,

Each time I thought I read your best poem, you post another one better than the previous poem.

This one comes bearing beautiful phrasing; vivid imagery; innovative personification; strong meter and rhyme; and homage to the moon.

You certainly chose the right user name.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
    Thank you, Poetic Friend. I'm really flattered by your complimentary words and honored by the six-star review that you have put on this poem! I'm glad that you are part of my readership, and I thank you for your support.

    (I'm a cancer, so I'm a moonchild in the first place, always been fascinated with the moon, as well as Greek and Roman mytholgy. that's where the name comes from, just in case you didin't know "Luna" is the Roman goddess of the moon.

    All my best,
    jeni
reply by Poetic Friend on 04-Feb-2017
    Wow, Luna, I am a cancer, too. I think why that is why I am so connected to your work.
Comment from tfawcus
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The repeating line of a Kyrielle Sonnet is such an important element of it and yours is just perfect. I very much liked your coinage of the word 'moonstream' too.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments regarding my Kyrielle Sonnet and the repeating line. I'm glad you liked it, also the work "moonstream!" I appreciate your support today.
Comment from robyn corum
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Night's wonders sometimes make me swoon ~
I bundle moonbeams for a dream.

Funny how you almost always mention Luna in your poems. She must love that! *smile* This was fun!

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
    Yes, she does love that. Luna is actually the name for the Roman Goddess of the moon, and considering that I'm a cancer, a moonchild, and obsessed with the moon, Luna appears often! Glad you enjoyed this, robyn.

    love,
    jeni
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a delightful Kyrielle sonnet, my friend with good choice of repeating line. Excellent rhymes make this a well done sonnet, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
    Thank you so much for your kind comments regarding my Kyrielle sonnet. I'm glad you enjoyed the repeating line and the rhymes. Thank you for your support of my poetry today, Debbie.

    love,
    jeni
Comment from c_lucas
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The moon rules the night and the lovers. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
    Thank you, charlie. I'm happy you enjoyed this and thank you for the read, review and support.

    Best,
    jeni
reply by c_lucas on 03-Feb-2017
    You're welcome, Jeni. Charlie