Comment from Brewster

Excellent

This story captured me and drew me in and it was nice and it is true overpopulation is a very real problem we ignore and keep having babies we cannot afford-I'm glad someone spoke out poor Chinese and Japanese girls! *****stars great story.-tells the truth.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thank you so much.

reply by Brewster on 30-Mar-2016

Your welcome. Keep writing.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well Victor I think it's a lovely free verse poem and addition to Jyoti's Climate Change project.

Good use of poetic devices and some unique images such as the heart reopens the caves of hibernation and the mountains yawn.

Kudos to you, this is refreshingly wonderful. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

I woke up to a smile with this review, Gloria. Thank you.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I like all these poems about mother nature and man's raping of her. From global warming to the deforestation of the rainforest. The news is getting out there.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Good project idea, wasn't it? And, of course, I didn't think of it. Natch. :)

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

This was an excellent read, separately and then again together. This type of poem is new to me as a reader and for sure a reviewer, so I am at a loss as to how to critique, other than the content is very good in both.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

That's a pretty good critique as it is. :)