Comment from Juliette Chamberlain

Exceptional

Beautiful Easter message, with precise wording which benefits from its brevity, and every word so true.
It really is a lovely Easter tribute to Our Lord of Life, Jesus Christ.

Warmly,

Juliette

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Juliette, for this most wonderful review and exceptional comments and amazing stars, happy Easter.

Comment from Donovan

Excellent

Always good to hear people bear their testimony of the Redeemer. I think your words are specific and convey your meaning. I believe the preferred spelling of judgment is not to have a E after the g.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A neat little acrostic that reminds us of the fundamental Easter message, that there is hope for us all. The hyphen at the end of the first line is unnecessary as enjambement is an accepted feature of English language poetry.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Patti, for this most wonderful review and comments. I get criticised for using or not using,

reply by Pantygynt on 03-Apr-2015

Yes. Hyphens are awkward and generally speaking are going out of fashion but the dictionary can be helful. I checked before writing my review of your work. Life is not about knowing all the answers but it is about knowing where to find them!

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015

Thank you.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Faith to faith, it's all about Jesus! Great entry! All my sins on the cross. We have to let go and let God remove the pain. East to west is around the globe and there is no end, gone. We need to forgive and forget, Jesus did! This is a Good News message for the world. God bless as you celebrate the Risen Lord! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

An acrostic with rhyming couplets, excellent. The Achievement in the title looks odd. Faith poems are appropriate to the coming Easter holidays. Good luck in the
contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Great job with your acrostic poem about Calvary. Each line tells the story of why it is such an important place. Nice end rhymes as well.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi the author,

Appropriate theme for Holy Week and Easter. In the crucifixion, the renewal of everything is begun, as the Old Adam dies on the cross, the New Adam rises three days later from the tomb.

He is risen!

Patrick

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Patrick, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

An excellent piece of writing. I liked the opening lines: cross of Calvary stole away - all my sins that glorious day. A good use imagery there. You tell the story well and I couldn't find any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Jacob, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Your acrostic is much enhanced by the addition of a definite rhythm and rhyme scheme. The third rhyme at the end gives a sense of completeness as your poem reaches its conclusion. Sincerity, faith and a sense of thanksgiving all shine through this poem of yours. It is a strong entry to the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Tony, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A lovely Easter themed acrostic. Well worded with great flow.I wish you the best in the contest. Have a blessed day and Easter, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Debbie, for this most wonderful review and comments.