Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, Theresa, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the way God is always around you, you just have to open the eyes to see. reminds me of the verse where it says you can't go anywhere and not find God, to the heights and the depths under the earth, God will always be there

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

excellent use of enjambment to keep thought flowing from line to line
strong use of occasional rhyme
lovely, upbeat descriptive detail with strong sensory appeal
I like the use of the bridge lines separating the tercets
soulful expression of emotion in this thoughtful poetic prayer
Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you very much Brooke:)

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Thank you very much Brooke:)

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Thank you very much Brooke:)

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Very spiritual and lively. Reads real smoothly. Like the repetition of "tell me, tell me" gives it a song-like quality. Very nicely written. Les

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you so much Les:)

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Thank you so much Les:)

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Thank you so much Les:)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Teresa,

This is a beautiful poem written to the Lord. I loved every word of it. You did a great job in writing it. Thanks so much for sharing it.

Kat

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you so much Kat:)

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

"Whisper" is a delightful quick prayer that tells the Father that you are seeking with anticipation the lovely secret places he has hidden for you today. Oh that we all might approach life and pray: Open my eyes, wake up my ears
soften my heart, ignite my mind.

This is my honest feedback but as for suggestions for improvement . . . my opinion is "You Nailed It!" (I am out of 6 stars).
May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you so much for the awesome review!

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Thank you so much for the awesome review!

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for the awesome review!

reply by Dr. Nad on 22-Nov-2014

You are very welcome, Embrace the Love from above!

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Teresa, this is a most heartfelt poem my friend, it is almost a plea for God to make an appearance, I have always been taught that he is everywhere so your beautiful words are very appropriate.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you so much Eric:)

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Comment from Genya

Exceptional

I can not offer any suggestions for improvement. This was a deep and personal message. Excellent choice of words throughout with such softness and inspiration. Through the sweet cardinal song or the flight of a butterfly your message I wish to know. A beautiful stanza full of peace and tranquility. An excellent poem. Genya

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you so much Genya for the awesome review and gift of all the stars:)

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Thank you so much Genya for the awesome review and gift of all the stars:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Genya for the awesome review and gift of all the stars:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Genya for the awesome review and gift of all the stars:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Genya for the awesome review and gift of all the stars:)

Comment from Uma Prosad Das

Exceptional

Excellent spiritual poetry, in every little bit
The poet finds the great Almighty God does exist
He finds His voice in whisper in the breeze,
Message in sweet cardinal song or finds Him in the trees
In art or inert in everything
According to the poet God is existing
Excellent! Excellent!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Thank you so much for the awesome review and the gift of all the stars:)

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Thank you so much for the awesome review and the gift of all the stars:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for the awesome review and the gift of all the stars:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for the awesome review and the gift of all the stars:)

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for the awesome review and the gift of all the stars:)

Comment from kanimozhi T

Excellent

Nice poem. Nice artwork. You sing the poem like a child. Rhythmic refrain. Strong but powerful prayer. I wish it to be fulfilled. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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Comment from sebe

Excellent

a very sensitive poem. the poems teller yearns for Lord. what a beautiful will it is. the Flow of the lyric is very good. nice reading experience.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you for the great review:)

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Thank you for the great review:)