Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Brooke,

Nice refreshing twist by asking the sun to come out and play in these busy days of schedules.

Most creative and a fun read.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Jax :-) Brooke

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Very pretty poem with words to touch the heart. Your word flow and rhyming are good, as you have this talk with the sun. Something to make one smile.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, GWinterwin :-) Brooke

Comment from rod007

Excellent

A stunning conversation with the sun and it was lucky the hot dazzling guest did not burn her rays of fiery flames on our host but then she would not as they were friends. In any event they'll be together when nighttime ends. Well done, Brooke.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

What a lovely poem. I love the sun and love to spend time in sunlight. If I don't see the sun for a few days, I get depressed :) Luckily where I am, we have a lot of sunshine. This is very well done.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014

CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Verdugo Bolivar

Excellent

My girlfriend liked your poem, the words danced to a rhythmic tune that soothed the heart. You found a way to make the typical great. Keep on shining and illuminate... Keep writing

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

11gomeze, thank you so much. I'm so glad to hear your girlfriend likes the poem, too :-) Brooke

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

I issued an invitation, Looks like Sawyer is happy with the Halloween candy he got, that's a very nice expressed poem,
nice rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Erich, thank you so much. He loved collecting the candy, but as of yesterday afternoon, he had eaten exactly two lollipops, and he got them as rewards for especially good behavior :-) Brooke

reply by lakeport on 04-Nov-2014

your welcome,that's good ,so he appreciates
it more, Hugs!lakeport,

Comment from Warren Rodgers

Excellent

hmmm and just how was that invitation delivered? I don't think the mailman could get anywhere near that place! :) Terrific personification throughout, great alliteration and pure abcb rhymes. Always a pleasure to read your smooth meter and well chosen words!
All the best, Rodger :)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014

Rodger, I have my ways, my friend, and those ways are a trade secret :-) Thanks so much for your review :-) Brooke

Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

I imagine what kids think about the sun, I like to talk to them about stuff like that because when you don't tell them anything, just ask, you learn how the mind works.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Thank you, JM, for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke

reply by JM daSilva on 04-Nov-2014

Pleasure.

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

A wonderful poem about the sun, and your use of personification is adorable. I am going to miss the longer daylight hours in the following months. But we will survive. Hugs, Drew

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Drew Delaney, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Oh Brooke, I love this...a wonderful talk with the sun...love the way you worded it...and a stunning picture...very well written you...and I love the picture of Sawyer and Potato...so sweet they are...smiling...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 02-Nov-2014

so welcome you...luff...xxoo