Comment from flamingstar

Excellent

Adorable picture, although I don't know that they'd be "dancing" during a storm! More likely hunkered down until it passes. At any rate, since it's the storm that's ravaging the skies, your second line should start with "ravages" instead of ravage. Syllable count will be 17.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014

Thank you flaminstar for the excellent review and stars. Honestly, I thought I had worded it ravages, I just missed this in the editing. God Bless and thank you so much for the help.

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you again for the awesome review. The voting has began under Haiku-snowstorm. Please take the time to vote. God Bless!

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Storm of snow, indeed the Polar bears must love a snow storm, that's a very nice expressed Haiku poem.Good luck at the contest.God bless you.lakeport.

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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014

Thank you lakeport for the excellent review and wonderful stars. God Bless!

reply by lakeport on 15-Oct-2014

your welcome,lakeport.

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you again for the awesome review. The voting has began under Haiku-snowstorm. Please take the time to vote. God Bless!

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you again for the awesome review. The voting has began under Haiku-snowstorm. Please take the time to vote. God Bless!

reply by lakeport on 16-Oct-2014

your welcome.lakeport.

reply by lakeport on 16-Oct-2014

your welcome.lakeport.