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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Rancher's Daughter"Poems about the old West.
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Comment from SteveY
A perfectly written little open here that tells a story of love in the springtime. Wonderful rhyming perfect rhythm excellent ole time language. Great job with this one my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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A perfectly written little open here that tells a story of love in the springtime. Wonderful rhyming perfect rhythm excellent ole time language. Great job with this one my friend.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much Steve. I am pleased you like it! Have a good night! Nancy
Comment from expressions9
Hi Nancy
LOL! An excellent poem! You've really captured the Irish accent and slang so well and tell the story with such humour :) I liked the "carriage" "marriage" stanza! Great imagery, rhyme, rhythm and flow! (I think this would have won a contest :)
God bless,
Christine x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Hi Nancy
LOL! An excellent poem! You've really captured the Irish accent and slang so well and tell the story with such humour :) I liked the "carriage" "marriage" stanza! Great imagery, rhyme, rhythm and flow! (I think this would have won a contest :)
God bless,
Christine x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much Christine. I really appreciate the six. I had fun writing this poem. My Son and Daughter love it too. Have a lovely evening! Nancy
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You're welcome! You too :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! I love your summation on this one. Poor Finn, bagged and tagged before he could even get to first base. This is awesome and would have been a great entry for one of the story poem contests. I am thrilled to see your muse is not only full of energy, she is also quite slap happy. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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LOL! I love your summation on this one. Poor Finn, bagged and tagged before he could even get to first base. This is awesome and would have been a great entry for one of the story poem contests. I am thrilled to see your muse is not only full of energy, she is also quite slap happy. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Bagged and Tagged. I like that! Thank you for the review Angel.
Have a wonderful evening! Nancy
Comment from c_lucas
Farmers/Farmer's ???
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Farmers/Farmer's ???
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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You are so right! Thanks for that spag Charlie. Have a great evening. Nancy
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You're welcome, Nancy. Charlie
Comment from granny goes viral
This is so funny. I love poems in vernacular. I give you wee five. Not so wee after all. Loved the rhyme and quick time. Good fast read and clever too.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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This is so funny. I love poems in vernacular. I give you wee five. Not so wee after all. Loved the rhyme and quick time. Good fast read and clever too.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I thank you for the five. They are not wee after all they are exceptional. So pleased you enjoyed the humor. xsx Nancy
Comment from royowen
I love your wonderful well written colloquial rhyming rhythmic romp, ( in the hay no less) this was most entertaining Nancy, the dialogue was perfect, I is definitely something that could read or sung in the front bar of a pub! Articulate. Colloquially speaking, nice free flow, creative and absorbing, abab rhyming was good, nice tempo, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I love your wonderful well written colloquial rhyming rhythmic romp, ( in the hay no less) this was most entertaining Nancy, the dialogue was perfect, I is definitely something that could read or sung in the front bar of a pub! Articulate. Colloquially speaking, nice free flow, creative and absorbing, abab rhyming was good, nice tempo, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much for the thoughtful review Roy. I am pleased you enjoyed it. Have a nice evening! Nancy
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I meant to give you a six for this outstanding poem Nancy, apologies! Roy,
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That's okay Roy. Five is an excellent rating as well. I just appreciate the review! Nancy
Comment from Zinnia48
This was a fun/funny story about a young romance nipped in the bud! the last line was unexpected and quite humorous. Great rhythm and rhyme. caroline
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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This was a fun/funny story about a young romance nipped in the bud! the last line was unexpected and quite humorous. Great rhythm and rhyme. caroline
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much Zinnia. Actually it was a shot gun wedding. LOL Have a nice evening! Nancy
Comment from madhatter1977
I laughed so much reading this, Nancy! It has a Benny Hill or Carry on... feel to it - British programmes and films from when I was growing up. Superb innuendo and even drama despite the laughs!! I bet the dinner table chat is slightly strained! Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I laughed so much reading this, Nancy! It has a Benny Hill or Carry on... feel to it - British programmes and films from when I was growing up. Superb innuendo and even drama despite the laughs!! I bet the dinner table chat is slightly strained! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Wow Pete! Thanks for the lovely six! It was fun to write. I do like poems that tell a tale. Have a wonderful evening! Nancy
Comment from Domino 2
When I saw the Title, I expected a naughty limerick, Nancy, though I admit I'm a bit of a weirdo. LOL.
In a way, the extremely funny and subtly bawdy content resembles a limerick.
This is definitely the funniest poem you've ever written, and I LOL on various occasions.
Brilliant flow and rhymes, plus local dialect.
The best thing I've read on here for a while.
Here's a sixer, but I wish I had a 'seven' available.
BRAVO!
I'm still smiling.
Blimey, you've sure showed your poetic versatility here, my talented friend.
All the best, Ray (bowing in admiration) :-) xx
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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When I saw the Title, I expected a naughty limerick, Nancy, though I admit I'm a bit of a weirdo. LOL.
In a way, the extremely funny and subtly bawdy content resembles a limerick.
This is definitely the funniest poem you've ever written, and I LOL on various occasions.
Brilliant flow and rhymes, plus local dialect.
The best thing I've read on here for a while.
Here's a sixer, but I wish I had a 'seven' available.
BRAVO!
I'm still smiling.
Blimey, you've sure showed your poetic versatility here, my talented friend.
All the best, Ray (bowing in admiration) :-) xx
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Well, I have to admit I laughed all the way through it myself. I just kept thinking of things to say! Thanks Ray, You paid me a huge compliment here, Big hugs. Nancy
Comment from Linda England Bonam
I love this one, Nancy! What a fun piece it was to read. I loved your dialogue in it, and I loved the ending!
Really cute, and worthy of a six!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I love this one, Nancy! What a fun piece it was to read. I loved your dialogue in it, and I loved the ending!
Really cute, and worthy of a six!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Another six! Thank you Linda. I am so pleased you enjoyed the humor! Have a lovely evening. Nancy
