If Heaven Ever Visits Earth
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6169 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
A group of butterflies is called a kaleidoscope; how very appropriate. I love butterflies. They are so pretty. thanks for sharing this lovely poem, Brooke. Hugs. Miss Sally
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A group of butterflies is called a kaleidoscope; how very appropriate. I love butterflies. They are so pretty. thanks for sharing this lovely poem, Brooke. Hugs. Miss Sally
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LIJ Red
Gold, pah. Let's request a skyful of butterflies over a prairie of yellow daffodils. With wild crabapples to provide the fragrance. They are almost as pretty as cherries in bloom anyway. Good poem, by the way.
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Gold, pah. Let's request a skyful of butterflies over a prairie of yellow daffodils. With wild crabapples to provide the fragrance. They are almost as pretty as cherries in bloom anyway. Good poem, by the way.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
"Kaleidoscopes of butterflies": what an amazing mental image! This is a wonderful poem, Brooke. I very much like the repetition of "kaleidoscopes of butterflies." The accompanying artwork is stunning and is a wonderful enhancement of your perfect poetry. Thank you, once again, for sharing. Alana
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"Kaleidoscopes of butterflies": what an amazing mental image! This is a wonderful poem, Brooke. I very much like the repetition of "kaleidoscopes of butterflies." The accompanying artwork is stunning and is a wonderful enhancement of your perfect poetry. Thank you, once again, for sharing. Alana
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Alana, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
interesting piece of poetic art! you paint a beautiful mental image! the poem flows effortlessly:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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interesting piece of poetic art! you paint a beautiful mental image! the poem flows effortlessly:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Hey Brooke - I learn something new almost everyday at FS. I didn't know kaleidoscope was the grouping name for butterflies - but as you said, it is most appropriate.
Beautiful pairing of photo and poetry. This collection of quatrains is engaging and conjures up images of peace.
Heaven visits earth every day offering glimpses into why we are alive, and what to expect tomorrow. Butterflies are a wonderful example of that.
Rose.
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Hey Brooke - I learn something new almost everyday at FS. I didn't know kaleidoscope was the grouping name for butterflies - but as you said, it is most appropriate.
Beautiful pairing of photo and poetry. This collection of quatrains is engaging and conjures up images of peace.
Heaven visits earth every day offering glimpses into why we are alive, and what to expect tomorrow. Butterflies are a wonderful example of that.
Rose.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Rose, thank you so much, my friend, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke - I didn't know that so I am smiling, I love butterflies. I enjoyed this one and the whimsy feel brought extra smiles this morning.
Well penned as always.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Dear Brooke - I didn't know that so I am smiling, I love butterflies. I enjoyed this one and the whimsy feel brought extra smiles this morning.
Well penned as always.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Maureen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Yes, 'If Heaven ever visits Earth' it will be a delight to behold. It will be so glorious will be magnificent. Good invitation you have put forward to behold of the glory and be a partaker. I join you in this muse.
ola thomas
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Yes, 'If Heaven ever visits Earth' it will be a delight to behold. It will be so glorious will be magnificent. Good invitation you have put forward to behold of the glory and be a partaker. I join you in this muse.
ola thomas
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Ola, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from ruzu27
Well, I guess that visit will be quite an event. Just imagine all de different colors. I didn't know you call a group of butterflies a kaleidoscope. I would certainly not have called it a flock, but it is good to know the correct word.
Beautiful artwork, it gives an idea of the delicate nature of the butterflies. Thank you for sharing.
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Well, I guess that visit will be quite an event. Just imagine all de different colors. I didn't know you call a group of butterflies a kaleidoscope. I would certainly not have called it a flock, but it is good to know the correct word.
Beautiful artwork, it gives an idea of the delicate nature of the butterflies. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Ruth, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Sanku
Thank you for the information that the collective noun for butterfly is 'kaleidoscope'.True what else can they be called .Lovely imagery in
kaleidoscope of butterfly over a field of gold."golden fields would be a field of your favorite dandelions or daffodils .With stunning picture it is a appealing poem like a feast to the senses.
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Thank you for the information that the collective noun for butterfly is 'kaleidoscope'.True what else can they be called .Lovely imagery in
kaleidoscope of butterfly over a field of gold."golden fields would be a field of your favorite dandelions or daffodils .With stunning picture it is a appealing poem like a feast to the senses.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Sanku, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
I love butterflies. Your poem is perfect and the picture selected simply stunning. I could imagine Sawyer with a butterfly net. LOL
Thanks for sharing.
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I love butterflies. Your poem is perfect and the picture selected simply stunning. I could imagine Sawyer with a butterfly net. LOL
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
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Cajungirl, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome.
