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Visible Flight of Invisible Might!

An invisible might drives one to a visible flight.

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Comment from Jade Lawson
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I really enjoy this poem. Your faith for the Lord is so perceptible and this poem so inspirational. I loved the way you showed how you don't take for granted the nature and the surroundings which are a gift from the Lord. Also, how you show that God should always be the path to follow.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from GaryCecil
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You have such strong conviction on your faith

Never cry or feel shy, but try again and again,
Once and again try until desired aim you gain;
Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!

I enjoyed the poem and look forward to your future writings.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from Titan Black
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This is hot! You said a lot of things that had a message
To it. And you did a great job at painting the picture.
For, nothing holds up a bird, but God. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from kiwijenny
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Have faith in God to be wise ,brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!

I love these lines because it reminds me of the verse...God does not give us a spirit of fear but of power love and a sound mind.....paraphrased...I love your poem
Well done and God bless

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from Darkhorse555
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upon the picture a pair flying beauty dressed in its light attire in gods light in your soul you draw outwards your inner beauty gods blessing

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from The Death
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Hello
i agree with your notes.He is everywhere,in light,in farthest sight,and around us with His invisible might.
You have worked well with quatrains here that rhyme well as per abcb scheme along with some random rhymes.
Nice assonance in cry..shy..try.
It has beautiful imagery too.i enjoyed reading it.

Regards
Shar-A

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Hi RPS,
You have a great rhythm and strong rhyme in this post. I really loved how you penned this one. Great messages of faith and guidance. A well penned submission for the faith contest.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from Steve Pantazis
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I've got my spiritual solar sails out, ready for my flight of might into the cosmos on this busy workweek. Glad I had a chance to "fuel up" with some motivational words.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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A very lyrically beautiful piece of work, RPSaxena, and I couldn't agree more with you about everything that it so eloquently states!

This is very inspirational. A perfect reminder, for each and everyone of us, Who and what is behind ANY success we might enjoy in our lives. It isn't simply because we 'got lucky', nor was it because we were 'at the right place, at the right time.' God recognizes those who are faithful to Him, those that honor His name. Anyone who believes differently and is struggling with success of their own should perhaps put two-and-two together.

Great poem, I loved every word!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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    :)
Comment from SteveY
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This one definitely gets my six! Just an outstanding piece of writing. Love the philosphy too. I couldn't agree more. We should not identify with our apparent seperateness but constantly affirm our oneness with the Creator!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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    Hi SteveY,
    Thank you very much for your so nice and morale boosting comments. I really feel myself honored by your "Six Stars!"