Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

and though you tout impressive rank
you don't quite have it in the tank <<< met some of these folks already!

so go pump hands where bullshit flows << superb line

I have no need to re-arrange
my forthright, honest, metered words
that polished up your off beat turds << LOL!

I write in proper da's and DUMS << Yesss! I always consider that an error and point it out and fix half of 'em myself. Get thx for it. Never met anyone who got mad at 4, or even the odd 3... as long as they FIX it then my 20 minutes of time is well spent. But then I spent my life as a teacher. I correct things. :)
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C PJ, this whole piece is a work of art... fantabulous!
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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012

Sterling review, thanks Phyllis. Very much appreciated and glad you liked my poem.
Cheers closet