Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Lovely! While I have read each of these pieces, I contend that this one COULD stand alone. I loved the writes on the wild flowers. Did you ever create that book? And, now, I am enjoying this new series on the faes. Plus, the writing is so elegant. Magnificent flowing beat and beautiful rhyming scheme. And, very poetic imagery. As always, you inspire me. And, thank you for that...Sue

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009

Thank you, Sue. Your comments are positively encouraging!! Brooke :-)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Nice job with the editing of part one. In part two, I again enjoy your alliteration and personification of "sun" and your perfect rhymes. Your "spider's silk" frocks are very imaginative. I noticed that since Peter is back with regularity, he has written in this form. He says it's not hard for him because he has written the rima for a long time. See what I mean about practice. Soon, you'll be whipping these out like limericks!! I am impressed that the last part is promised for tomorrow; your pen is obviously moving faster. Oh, I almost forgot to tell how much I liked your inserting your peace message.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009

Thank you, Joan. Whipping them out, now that sounds like a fantasy!! All I can say is God bless Peter. I sweat over each line. So glad you like the peace message as well as the rest. Brooke :-)

reply by Joan E. on 01-Oct-2009

I actually think he puffs a bit, since the ottava rima form cannot be that easy for anyone. Besides, it's a great form of flattery that he would depart from his usual forms, after you started your cycle! You might want to pace yourself, however, and write something easy as your next offering; otherwise the rest of us will be too intimidated! LOL & hugs- Joan

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009

Believe me, once part three is done, I plan something easier for a day or two!!! LOL

reply by Joan E. on 01-Oct-2009

Right, don't rest too long, we need you back in the "serious saddle" being a strong role model for the rest of us sloths!! ROTFLMBO -J

Comment from BJean

Excellent

Very nice continuation of this enchanting little fairy poem. i wrote a children's story called -Fairy Tail.
parts of your poem reminded me of it. Not posted here.
I'll catch your conclusion of this intricate style and tale. Very nicely done Jean

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009

Thank you, Jean. I hope you do post your story here sometime in the future! Brooke :-)

reply by BJean on 01-Oct-2009

maybe for you and in memory of my dear grandmother. We'll see where the wind blows:) Jean









































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Comment from Arturo Palavicini

Excellent

Every time I read one of your poems I face a dilemma, I'm not sure if I admire the content, the message or the structure.

And your notes at the end of every poem...

That's amazed me too.

English is not my native language, so it's a problem every time I tried to explain myself and communicate you what your verses make me feel.

Congratulations.

Arturo Palavicini

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Arturo, I am moved by your positive comments no matter why it turns out to be you like my poetry. You are most kind, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Brooke

If all of God's creatures can celebrate together, how sad that the human being still struggles to obtain that peace. I know it is a story...but the thought popped into my head. Love your description of their attire and the pleasure that was had by all.

Carol

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Thank you, Carol - your comments are lovely :-) Brooke

Comment from Gert sherwood

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Love it Brooke,
I felt like guest at the weeding and viewing the beauty of the bride all garbed with her mystical dress of sparking webs decorated with lace and decliate pearls.

I hope you are planing to put part 1 and 2 and your next part into a book of fantasy for all to read
Beautiful

Gert

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Thank you, Gert - I certainly do want to put the parts all together :-) Brooke

Comment from tony bronk

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Just totally and simply a beautiful poem, that expresses grandeur and offers to all the promise of love of peace, during such a precious affair(moment), that of two vowing to love and be faithful and harmless to one another ... for ever more. Very nice. Tony

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Thank you, Tony - your comments are gracious and encouraging :-) Brooke

reply by tony bronk on 30-Sep-2009

... and so is your poem. So we're even. Tony

Comment from Arkine

Excellent

It gave me that overall warm fuzzy feeling. I'm not used to that! ~L~ Great job, a truely lovely event, not just because of the dress, but it seems that these two are very much in love with each other. :)

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Thank you, my friend :-) I'm thrilled you are feeling warm and fuzzy and it has nothing to do with werewolves! LOL Brooke :-)

Comment from S.Yocom

Excellent

I was looking forward to reading Part Two, Brooke, and it has not been a disappointment. You continued the fairy story in the same soft and lovely fashion as in Part One. What a sweet tale.
Sally

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Sally, thank you. You are a sweetheart :-) Brooke

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

I feel like attending the wedding, too. I like the wedding dress in buttermilk, organza and pearls... And I enjoy the merry atmosphere in this special day of peace. You feed me with a beautiful scene today, Brooke...

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2009

Thank you, Belinda. You are most encouraging with such lovely comments :-) Brooke