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O My God and Mother Nature!

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Appreciation of God and Mother Nature

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Comment from steevie
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So the water cycle is part of God's mater plan in serving the earth with growth in more ways that one. All living things need water.
well thought out

steve

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from MM lives on :)
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Dearpoet a nice message of God here is in indeed a message of caring and your journey, follow paths wisely and listen to the inner ear ..well stated my friend

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from Curtis Hatch
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Raindrops speak God's glow as the rain nourishes the earth and brings forth new life as the winds blow. God does not speak to man except through nature and his Word. His muse is silent except through his written message. This is a real mind bender. It challenges the intellect of man.

Curtis

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from kra-z-ka-z
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Hi, AL CREATOR LITT Dear! I don't believe I've seen your name, or your stuff, before. I enjoyed this little ditty quite a bit. I'm not sure just what you meant by "Muse Lord mute;" though. Just sayn'.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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    THANKS FOR QUEST REVIEW.
    THAT MEANS YOU SHOULD MUSE LORD SILENTLY AND NOT CHAOTIC.
Comment from gramalot8
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Alcreator, this is a very nice book and chapters. Great messages of love and devotion and faith in a God. Thanks for sharing these messages with us.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from hagen
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Beautiful. Imagery is just a little fuzzy for me. I do understand the depth of your message but "Muse Lord mute" has me scratching my head just a little. A couple of re-reads by me is probably in order. Thanks for your artistry.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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I am not sure I understand. Here's what I got (without copying what you said at the top): In the cycle/ circle of life, rain fulfiills its God-given purpose by engendering and perpetuating life.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from mshugh
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Trying to decipher the phrase - round messages slow - I may be missing something, but I did love that first line - that's what caught my eye. Well done

Michael

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from Econ Teacher
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This poem is very deep. Maybe far deeper than I even understand, for that is where I am at. Though rain does help bring life and that is God's handiwork. Also, there is the water cycle, so that is how water can have a round flow.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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Comment from Treischel
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This 5-7-7 poem praises the glory of God, especially through his gift of nourishing rain. You paint it there for us to see. To water our personal Muse. It wraps around everything, Yes!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013


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