Hey, That's No Way to Say Goodbye!
See Note: A friend of 15 years chose euthanasia over cancer53 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very sad write but in the end we all have the choice in life to live and die the way we want no matter what anyone else thinks, meloncoly words here and I could feel your pain, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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This is a very sad write but in the end we all have the choice in life to live and die the way we want no matter what anyone else thinks, meloncoly words here and I could feel your pain, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hey Dolly... I once had a poet friend who said if you want to write slit your wrists and bleed on the page... right or wrong... I'm deeply humbled by your stellar review but even more so by the fact you understood that life has many sides and sometimes we are faced with reality. I wanted the voice to tell the truth... Every time I post something this honest I cringe. Thanks so much and again I'm grateful for your thoughts. Yours, diana
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fantastic poem about exaltation of friendship, sacrifice and decisiveness about goal of euthanasia, there is good flow of thoughts, nice imagery and visual portrayal; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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This is a fantastic poem about exaltation of friendship, sacrifice and decisiveness about goal of euthanasia, there is good flow of thoughts, nice imagery and visual portrayal; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hey Alcreator,I once had a poet friend who said if you want to write slit your wrists and bleed on the page... right or wrong... I'm deeply humbled by your stellar review but even more so by the fact you understood that life has many sides and sometimes we are faced with reality. I wanted the voice to tell the truth... Every time I post something this honest I cringe. Thanks so much and again I'm grateful for your thoughts. Yours, diana
Comment from estory
I thought you did a good job with the contrasts between the lively party, and the news that your friend is committed to euthanasia . The champagne and the lively chatter seem to define his life, and his willingness to take his own life to end the pain and suffering is all the more poignant. The last line was really strong. "The friendship we shared is deafening and silent." the contrasts there are really powerful and we feel ourselves pulled in two different directions; sympathizing with him, and feeling the pain of the loss. estory
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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I thought you did a good job with the contrasts between the lively party, and the news that your friend is committed to euthanasia . The champagne and the lively chatter seem to define his life, and his willingness to take his own life to end the pain and suffering is all the more poignant. The last line was really strong. "The friendship we shared is deafening and silent." the contrasts there are really powerful and we feel ourselves pulled in two different directions; sympathizing with him, and feeling the pain of the loss. estory
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2018
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Hey estory... thanks so very much. yours, diana
