Betrayal
Difficult recovery from betrayal58 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
An interesting free verse, rather married to the artwork, it would seem, and making as a whole an excellent presentation. I read the figure but don't recall just how much of our universe is hard vacuum at near zero Kelvin. Lots of emptiness out there.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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An interesting free verse, rather married to the artwork, it would seem, and making as a whole an excellent presentation. I read the figure but don't recall just how much of our universe is hard vacuum at near zero Kelvin. Lots of emptiness out there.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from moongirlwriter
I find prose to be so therapeutic and write in that format often, especially in matters of the heart. Something I have found and now know, is that life does change. It is forever changing and we grow within those changes. Sometimes, alone is good and necessary.
I'm not so sure I agree with the graphic accompanying this work but the writing is good, clear and holds truth for me. Hang in there and keep writing.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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I find prose to be so therapeutic and write in that format often, especially in matters of the heart. Something I have found and now know, is that life does change. It is forever changing and we grow within those changes. Sometimes, alone is good and necessary.
I'm not so sure I agree with the graphic accompanying this work but the writing is good, clear and holds truth for me. Hang in there and keep writing.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
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Smile.
Comment from EverInParadise
A clear and understandable piece. The picture is interesting, no sure how it fits with you poem, but nice to look at. The spacing you chose between phrases lifts the words and meaning.
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A clear and understandable piece. The picture is interesting, no sure how it fits with you poem, but nice to look at. The spacing you chose between phrases lifts the words and meaning.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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EverinParadise: thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. livelylinda
Comment from patcelaw
Betrayal is always difficult, and much more so when it is someone we thought were truly on our side, I have had a few of those in my life. Blessings, Patricia
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Betrayal is always difficult, and much more so when it is someone we thought were truly on our side, I have had a few of those in my life. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Patricia, for reading and commenting. Can you imagine a world totally free of lies and betrayal? Of course, I believe that is Heaven! livelylinda
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about ultimate betrayal by a loved one that I very hard to overcome. It usually leaves the victim devastated and with extreme heartache.
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A very well-written poem about ultimate betrayal by a loved one that I very hard to overcome. It usually leaves the victim devastated and with extreme heartache.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Sandra: thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from Possummagic
I loved your poem and I felt your pain. I think betrayal is the hardest thing in our lives to ever recover from. It not only betrays our heart but our mind and I don't know how you ever move on. Well written.
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I loved your poem and I felt your pain. I think betrayal is the hardest thing in our lives to ever recover from. It not only betrays our heart but our mind and I don't know how you ever move on. Well written.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm keeping "my head above water", refusing to crumble due to so many lies told to me. livelylinda
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Keep on writing.
Comment from Mustang Patty
a very moving poem about the feelings of betrayal, and the battle to find our way back to feeling normal, and being able to face the day and people. Well presented and a great structure to the work,
~patty~
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a very moving poem about the feelings of betrayal, and the battle to find our way back to feeling normal, and being able to face the day and people. Well presented and a great structure to the work,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Patty, for reading and commenting. livellinda
Comment from Auto-Manic
if you live long enough you go through this, and betrayal is a very sad thing, but, think how bad it is for those who do this? How about when a Country does it? How do you get over that?
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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if you live long enough you go through this, and betrayal is a very sad thing, but, think how bad it is for those who do this? How about when a Country does it? How do you get over that?
AM
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Auto-Manic, for reading and commenting. livelylinda
