Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Friggin hell, Deano - your opening racket had me checking my phone, fire alarm and entryphone system! The soundtrack is obviously then real and interesting, so again, I had to look behind me to check if anyone had walked in my front door without me realising. ;-)

What is an 'OBGYN'?

Very realistic conveyance in believable and fun/sceptical dialogue and thoughts.

With respect, I'm not a fan of notes which expand the text of the write (especially here where there is a word limit), rather than allowing the reader to make their own interpretations.

Anyway, you know by now what an irritating nit-picker I can be. :-)

Excellent shortie of the baby born to eat...anything that breathes. LOL

Best wishes, Ray



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 Comment Written 20-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

OBGYN is an Obstetrics and gynaecology physician, Rayman. At least that's what we call 'em over here in the states. You know, a baby doctor?
Thanks for the review and comments.
I appreciate it.
Always with respect
~Dean

reply by Domino 2 on 20-Oct-2015

Thanks for your gracious reply and explanation, Deano.

It sounds like one of your ghouls to me. LOL

Ray

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hahaha, I know, right?
OBGYN is just the easier, shorter, commonly known abbreviation used. I've waited in far too many of their office waiting rooms...if you know what I mean...:}

reply by Domino 2 on 20-Oct-2015

'The monstrous object of an OBGYN grinned and devoured everyone in its path'. ;-)