Early morning.
A time of delight.83 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 poem, early morning, is a gentle reminder to me and all readers that each new morning represents a new beginning of the universe.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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This 5-7-5 poem, early morning, is a gentle reminder to me and all readers that each new morning represents a new beginning of the universe.
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much Bill, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from GregoryCody
Oh wow. BEAUTIFUL! THIS is a champion piece. It should win. Take a look at what's winning though. This is amazing with a Great close. Ugh I wish there were better readers on FS.
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Oh wow. BEAUTIFUL! THIS is a champion piece. It should win. Take a look at what's winning though. This is amazing with a Great close. Ugh I wish there were better readers on FS.
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thank you Gregory, at least you think it was worthy, and I'm so encouraged by your words, review and lovely stars, blessings, my friend, Roy.
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Blessings to you too my friend
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Thanks again Gregory
Comment from mermaids
Your words create the feeling of a new day, it is true, a good feeling of newness and hope comes with the dawn. Excellent use of words and flow of lines. Your words bring up good feelings.
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Your words create the feeling of a new day, it is true, a good feeling of newness and hope comes with the dawn. Excellent use of words and flow of lines. Your words bring up good feelings.
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much for the really great review, comments, and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
love early morning
new hope that's dawning holds sway
herald of mercy
A clever use of words that are a delight -
early morning - a gift of a new day and new hope....
Most impressive - good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
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love early morning
new hope that's dawning holds sway
herald of mercy
A clever use of words that are a delight -
early morning - a gift of a new day and new hope....
Most impressive - good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much Margaret, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from zanya
Yes it's a heady prospect - a new day and what it may hold for us - yet we rarely have time to rejoice and look forward, so consumed are we with our 'cares'- appropriate pic
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Yes it's a heady prospect - a new day and what it may hold for us - yet we rarely have time to rejoice and look forward, so consumed are we with our 'cares'- appropriate pic
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much , for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from bizzygirl
Lovely photo and poem. The poem epresses succinctly what I feel every day. Each day is annew as you suggest from the Bible verse. A lot of meaning in the poem: love- from God, and of morning; each day is a new begging, holds sway is a lovely phrase; herald of mercy again spiritual. Good luck in the contest. This is a winner
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Lovely photo and poem. The poem epresses succinctly what I feel every day. Each day is annew as you suggest from the Bible verse. A lot of meaning in the poem: love- from God, and of morning; each day is a new begging, holds sway is a lovely phrase; herald of mercy again spiritual. Good luck in the contest. This is a winner
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
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Comment from I am Cat
Is that a stork in the midst of the calm morning sunrise?
It's a lovely scene in its serenity...
Interesting word choices shows faith without actually using the words... I like that.
Shows spirituality in any force of nature... I like that even more.
Well done and good luck in the contest. I believe you've hit the nail on the head.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Is that a stork in the midst of the calm morning sunrise?
It's a lovely scene in its serenity...
Interesting word choices shows faith without actually using the words... I like that.
Shows spirituality in any force of nature... I like that even more.
Well done and good luck in the contest. I believe you've hit the nail on the head.
:)
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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It's a pelican, common to the river, beautiful bird, thank you for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Glasstruth
Each morning is the beginning of something we don't know, but anticipate with the coming of the light. In so few words you've created a wonderful thought. Les
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Each morning is the beginning of something we don't know, but anticipate with the coming of the light. In so few words you've created a wonderful thought. Les
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much Les, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from thee-name
Excellent 5-7-5. I enjoyed reading your poem.
love early morning
new hope that's dawning holds sway
herald of mercy
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Excellent 5-7-5. I enjoyed reading your poem.
love early morning
new hope that's dawning holds sway
herald of mercy
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
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thank you!
Comment from Shirley McLain
Love early morning. It's my favorite time of the entire day before all the hussle and bussle starts. It is a new start of a day that God gave us. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Love early morning. It's my favorite time of the entire day before all the hussle and bussle starts. It is a new start of a day that God gave us. Good job.
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks so much, for the great review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy.
