I'm But a Tiny Drop of Rain
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6121 total reviews
Comment from Hareem.S
This is a beautiful poem I must say. I like the conversation of the an drops and see and how tiny and grand things are dependent on each other. Enjoyed reading it.
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This is a beautiful poem I must say. I like the conversation of the an drops and see and how tiny and grand things are dependent on each other. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Hareem, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GeorgieBoy
Nothing in the world is softer and weaker than water. Water is so soft that it cannot be harmed, damage or destroyed. We have much to be learned from nature, particularly water.
Well done, you captured this message brilliantly.
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Nothing in the world is softer and weaker than water. Water is so soft that it cannot be harmed, damage or destroyed. We have much to be learned from nature, particularly water.
Well done, you captured this message brilliantly.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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GeorgieBoy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Neonewman
Stunning artwork above which pales in comparison to this brilliantly crafted piece you have delivered below. I love the mind, it produces the most exquisite of things. God bless!
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Stunning artwork above which pales in comparison to this brilliantly crafted piece you have delivered below. I love the mind, it produces the most exquisite of things. God bless!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Neonewman, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
This is a really interesting poem. You have written about the tiny drop of rain very well. You always think up great things to write about and all of your poems are wonderful.
Kat
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Hi Brooke,
This is a really interesting poem. You have written about the tiny drop of rain very well. You always think up great things to write about and all of your poems are wonderful.
Kat
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Kat, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from alexisleech
Having been away for a while, this was a pleasure to read on my return. As usual, this reads beautifully, with perfect rhyme and meter. Could I expect any less? Of course not! Alexis x
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Having been away for a while, this was a pleasure to read on my return. As usual, this reads beautifully, with perfect rhyme and meter. Could I expect any less? Of course not! Alexis x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Alexis, how good it is to see you, and thank you so much for the lovely six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Brooke, this is a lovely poem that emphasizes the importance of even the smallest raindrop, even if it is not as large as the sea. (Childhood song I remember: "Little drops of water, little grains of sand, make the mighty oceans and the pleasant land.") Love, Jeanie
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Brooke, this is a lovely poem that emphasizes the importance of even the smallest raindrop, even if it is not as large as the sea. (Childhood song I remember: "Little drops of water, little grains of sand, make the mighty oceans and the pleasant land.") Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Jeanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from thee-name
Nice writing. Poem about ocean and rain drops.
I'M BUT A TINY DROP OF RAIN
AND YOU, THE SEA SO GRAND
WHOSE WAVES CAN RANGE FOR MILES AND MILES
AND RAGE AT YOUR CAMMAND
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Nice writing. Poem about ocean and rain drops.
I'M BUT A TINY DROP OF RAIN
AND YOU, THE SEA SO GRAND
WHOSE WAVES CAN RANGE FOR MILES AND MILES
AND RAGE AT YOUR CAMMAND
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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thee-name, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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THANK YOU!
Comment from nomi338
What a wonderful expression of humility. This may well be one of the most powerful nations if not the most powerful natiuons on the earth, but what would this country be without the contributions of each of its citizens. Brooke you continue to amaze me with the wisdom you express in your wonderfully written poems.
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What a wonderful expression of humility. This may well be one of the most powerful nations if not the most powerful natiuons on the earth, but what would this country be without the contributions of each of its citizens. Brooke you continue to amaze me with the wisdom you express in your wonderfully written poems.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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nomi, thank you so much for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
The photo complements your rhyming quatrains very well. I think that you personified the raindrop and maybe the sea as well. The 8/6/8/6 meter seems a very nice one.
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The photo complements your rhyming quatrains very well. I think that you personified the raindrop and maybe the sea as well. The 8/6/8/6 meter seems a very nice one.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Ine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Nosha17
Simple message which means a lot if we stop to consider the wonders of the Universe, of which the rain is a very vital part. Excellent rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Great picture and enjoyable as always. Faye
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Simple message which means a lot if we stop to consider the wonders of the Universe, of which the rain is a very vital part. Excellent rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Great picture and enjoyable as always. Faye
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
