Stardust Fell
A poem for Maureen54 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
Maureen has touched many lives with her beautiful words of poetry. This is a wonderful tribute to our special friend.
teresa
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Maureen has touched many lives with her beautiful words of poetry. This is a wonderful tribute to our special friend.
teresa
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
Comment from mermaids
The flow of your words captures a light feeling,as if you take the reader on a comforting journey. I like the feel and image of stardust and how angels can comfort us,even when we do not see them. Excellent poem that gives comfort to Maureen and all of us.
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The flow of your words captures a light feeling,as if you take the reader on a comforting journey. I like the feel and image of stardust and how angels can comfort us,even when we do not see them. Excellent poem that gives comfort to Maureen and all of us.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
Comment from Judd7
Great ! As a poetry teacher I always say: Look for any word that you can take out to tighten it. But it is great as is. Tightening goes a little like this:
they slowly disappeared,
heartbroken,
but comforted
knowing they would be with me always,
in this infinite universe.
You are a real poet...................Poet Q
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Great ! As a poetry teacher I always say: Look for any word that you can take out to tighten it. But it is great as is. Tightening goes a little like this:
they slowly disappeared,
heartbroken,
but comforted
knowing they would be with me always,
in this infinite universe.
You are a real poet...................Poet Q
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
Is this poem for Maureen? Either way, it's beautifully written. Flawless, actually. Just checked note at top. It is for Maureen. You nailed this. If she could read it, I think she would be very pleased.
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Is this poem for Maureen? Either way, it's beautifully written. Flawless, actually. Just checked note at top. It is for Maureen. You nailed this. If she could read it, I think she would be very pleased.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
