Leap
a rhyming epigram137 total reviews
Comment from Caressa_08
A good adult perspective set in poetry on what to do & how to do it, when obstacles are blocking the way. I agree, as sometimes the only option is--to damn the path and leap..Like Sawyer seems to be doing when this toy ring is blocking him, & leap he does.
Caressa
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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A good adult perspective set in poetry on what to do & how to do it, when obstacles are blocking the way. I agree, as sometimes the only option is--to damn the path and leap..Like Sawyer seems to be doing when this toy ring is blocking him, & leap he does.
Caressa
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Caressa :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is cute, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain about how to get past a path filled with obstacles. just jump over the obstacle. he just have been moving fast to be so blurry
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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this is cute, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain about how to get past a path filled with obstacles. just jump over the obstacle. he just have been moving fast to be so blurry
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
A great life lesson offered here, thank you for sharing! He is a little keg of fireworks! Always in the action of things.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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A great life lesson offered here, thank you for sharing! He is a little keg of fireworks! Always in the action of things.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an excellent short and sweet epigram, with the bonus of good meter and rhyme. Love the gutsy advice to take gutsy action when encountering obstacles rather than standing hesitantly, quaking in one's boots. Great action picture of Sawyer jumping over the ring. Love, Jeanie
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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This is an excellent short and sweet epigram, with the bonus of good meter and rhyme. Love the gutsy advice to take gutsy action when encountering obstacles rather than standing hesitantly, quaking in one's boots. Great action picture of Sawyer jumping over the ring. Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Jeanie :-) Brooke
Comment from James Dooney
You have done very well with this little work here. Its direct and blunt and straight to the point. Keep up the short stuff !
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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You have done very well with this little work here. Its direct and blunt and straight to the point. Keep up the short stuff !
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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James, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
This is another nice little poem with Sawyer in it again. I love seeing him and hearing what kind of things he's doing now. Your a wonderful grandma to write these cute poems about him.
Kat
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke,
This is another nice little poem with Sawyer in it again. I love seeing him and hearing what kind of things he's doing now. Your a wonderful grandma to write these cute poems about him.
Kat
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Kat, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I've never heard of an epigram until today ? But this is excellent it reminds me of those cards you buy with philosophical messages on them, it's so good and true, well done ,
Andrew
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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I've never heard of an epigram until today ? But this is excellent it reminds me of those cards you buy with philosophical messages on them, it's so good and true, well done ,
Andrew
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Andrew, thank you. Epigrams have been around for a long time, and I really like their use of economy of words to make a point and make it fast with maximum impact :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
That can be very good advice. I suppose this could also be another fun poem for children if you would want to change the one word to darn.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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That can be very good advice. I suppose this could also be another fun poem for children if you would want to change the one word to darn.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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WardHays, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from JudyS
Brooke, This is just wonderful! And the message is so true. You post the best pictures of Sawyer to go along with your writing. He's quite the inspiration. Great writing on this, I enjoyed it a lot. Have a good weekend, Judy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Brooke, This is just wonderful! And the message is so true. You post the best pictures of Sawyer to go along with your writing. He's quite the inspiration. Great writing on this, I enjoyed it a lot. Have a good weekend, Judy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from thee-name
Discribes leaping good.
WHEN OBSTACLES HAVE BLOCKED THE WAY
ALONG A PATH TO STEEP
AT TIMES THE ONLY OPTION IS--
TO DAMN THE PATH AND LEAP
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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Discribes leaping good.
WHEN OBSTACLES HAVE BLOCKED THE WAY
ALONG A PATH TO STEEP
AT TIMES THE ONLY OPTION IS--
TO DAMN THE PATH AND LEAP
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014
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thee-name, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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THANK YOU!
