You Are Being Watched
Happy living Protect and keep safe 202 words A Non-Fiction122 total reviews
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Paranoia in 132 words is more than adequately expressed in words but rather in a sense of helpless anger that borders on hysteria. The essence of the piece I suspect comes from a 'survivalist' living underground in the deep woods somewhere, probably in the USA. Sentences are short, sharp and resemble a full clip of ammo being fired willy nilly. The piece ends with a poorly phrased message,
"Prevention is better than cure."
Regards:
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Paranoia in 132 words is more than adequately expressed in words but rather in a sense of helpless anger that borders on hysteria. The essence of the piece I suspect comes from a 'survivalist' living underground in the deep woods somewhere, probably in the USA. Sentences are short, sharp and resemble a full clip of ammo being fired willy nilly. The piece ends with a poorly phrased message,
"Prevention is better than cure."
Regards:
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from Jonesy
The message is easily understandable, but I'm sorry to say this doesn't make any sense once the author gets into how to combat the message.
All I have to say until the author starts respecting people who try and help by actually replying to reviewers.
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The message is easily understandable, but I'm sorry to say this doesn't make any sense once the author gets into how to combat the message.
All I have to say until the author starts respecting people who try and help by actually replying to reviewers.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from Jonesy
The message is easily understandable, but I'm sorry to say this doesn't make any sense once the author gets into how to combat the message.
All I have to say until the author starts respecting people who try and help by actually replying to reviewers.
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The message is easily understandable, but I'm sorry to say this doesn't make any sense once the author gets into how to combat the message.
All I have to say until the author starts respecting people who try and help by actually replying to reviewers.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from Treischel
Very strong words of wisdom in this short prose writing. An admonition to protect what you have. To be alert against any and all. Dander lurks. Good advice, indeed.
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Very strong words of wisdom in this short prose writing. An admonition to protect what you have. To be alert against any and all. Dander lurks. Good advice, indeed.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
Comment from 4hisglory
God knows everything that is going to happen. So, I plan to put my safety in His hands. That doesn't mean I don't protect myself or watch out for danger, but I'm no going to live my life in fear.
You have expressed your need to warn people and that is commendable. However, I think you should state some examples here and some ways of protecting ourselves to made your article complete.
Blessings, LaVonne
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God knows everything that is going to happen. So, I plan to put my safety in His hands. That doesn't mean I don't protect myself or watch out for danger, but I'm no going to live my life in fear.
You have expressed your need to warn people and that is commendable. However, I think you should state some examples here and some ways of protecting ourselves to made your article complete.
Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from NicciFaye
Well....God is always watching, but never violating so you must be talking about Big Brother....because he is always watching everything that may impact our country or our freedom.
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Well....God is always watching, but never violating so you must be talking about Big Brother....because he is always watching everything that may impact our country or our freedom.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from Cookie333
Should I be worried? I guess I have always know technology might be tracked, but I always just assumed if I wasn't breaking the law or committing a sin against God that I would be okay
Now I am aware
Thank you
K
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Should I be worried? I guess I have always know technology might be tracked, but I always just assumed if I wasn't breaking the law or committing a sin against God that I would be okay
Now I am aware
Thank you
K
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from GaryCecil
Life is full of the unknown, and that is the damned truth!
You can't see, forecast or predict the future. You never know or no one tells you who will be cheated, molested, teased, adulterated, raped, kidnapped, hijacked, missing or murdered next or what will be lost, destroyed, stolen, robbed, looted or snatched how, by whom, when and where.
Great words ^^^
I think you did well with this :)!
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Life is full of the unknown, and that is the damned truth!
You can't see, forecast or predict the future. You never know or no one tells you who will be cheated, molested, teased, adulterated, raped, kidnapped, hijacked, missing or murdered next or what will be lost, destroyed, stolen, robbed, looted or snatched how, by whom, when and where.
Great words ^^^
I think you did well with this :)!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from William Walz
sounds like an exercise is advanced paranoia. I, for one, can't live my life constantly looking over my shoulder, which I believe is what you recommend we all do. Sorry, can't go along with this.
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sounds like an exercise is advanced paranoia. I, for one, can't live my life constantly looking over my shoulder, which I believe is what you recommend we all do. Sorry, can't go along with this.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Al,
I grew up in a little town and we had no need to lock our doors as there was nothing or no one watching us. Now days I lock my car and home doors. I view this write as a warning but you are right no one can predict the future neither you or me....chey
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Hi Al,
I grew up in a little town and we had no need to lock our doors as there was nothing or no one watching us. Now days I lock my car and home doors. I view this write as a warning but you are right no one can predict the future neither you or me....chey
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
