Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Chapter 10, part 4"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from adewpearl
After sigh, she added - After a sigh, he added
You're boyfriend isn't here - Your
Excellent dialogue throughout - it explains plot points, sounds realistic, conveys characters' emotions and personalities well. And you keep the mystery and tension going :-)
Brooke
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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After sigh, she added - After a sigh, he added
You're boyfriend isn't here - Your
Excellent dialogue throughout - it explains plot points, sounds realistic, conveys characters' emotions and personalities well. And you keep the mystery and tension going :-)
Brooke
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the eagle eye. I appreciate it.
Comment from donaldww
I wonder if Paige is ever going to accept Cash as a boyfriend. They seem to like each other, but won't admit anything in the open about it. Maybe not going out with the Doctor is supposed to give Cash some ideas. It's time he put his money where his thoughts are.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I wonder if Paige is ever going to accept Cash as a boyfriend. They seem to like each other, but won't admit anything in the open about it. Maybe not going out with the Doctor is supposed to give Cash some ideas. It's time he put his money where his thoughts are.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I think you're correct. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Oooh the doctor makes a play for Paige but receives the brush off. Her cast is all set to go on Friday morning. Nala says she will stay. What a terrible nest of hornets this has turned out to be.
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Oooh the doctor makes a play for Paige but receives the brush off. Her cast is all set to go on Friday morning. Nala says she will stay. What a terrible nest of hornets this has turned out to be.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for the kind review.
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LOL I can't either you!!!!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Nice chapter nothing real unearthly --no 9suspicious ghost)
Question am I seeing that Cash's attitude is changing or is it me?
You let me wondering what Page wants to disscus with Cash?
Gert
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Hello Barb
Nice chapter nothing real unearthly --no 9suspicious ghost)
Question am I seeing that Cash's attitude is changing or is it me?
You let me wondering what Page wants to disscus with Cash?
Gert
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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We shall see what Paige wants to talk with Cash about. It will happen in my next post. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from elgone
Nice addition to the story. It appears Cash will make any excuse not to accept there could be a ghost involved in things.
"I'll see if you changed your mine by Friday. - mind
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Nice addition to the story. It appears Cash will make any excuse not to accept there could be a ghost involved in things.
"I'll see if you changed your mine by Friday. - mind
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for the catch. I have changed it. I can't believe I do such things.
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I spelled cripple crimple in my book. Just saw it. LOL
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oh my, LOL
Comment from c_lucas
As usual this is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. It has good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
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"I'll see if you changed your mine(mind)by Friday.
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As usual this is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. It has good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
Error
"I'll see if you changed your mine(mind)by Friday.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I have corrected that error. Thank you for catching it.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I swear I'm getting to know these characters. I knew the second before I read the next line, that Cash was gonna pick up on the Marc line. Too believable. I can't wait to see what happens (is there going to be a love triangle, hmm).
Another great chapter.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I swear I'm getting to know these characters. I knew the second before I read the next line, that Cash was gonna pick up on the Marc line. Too believable. I can't wait to see what happens (is there going to be a love triangle, hmm).
Another great chapter.
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Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Who knows!! LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Tease!
