He Is
You are never alone.71 total reviews
Comment from kingskid
I wish I had a six to give you. This story is so powerful and beautiful and just what a lot of people should read.
Its always good to be reminded of the fact that although we don't always understand, God does and He knows.
Your dialogue is excellent.
I'm so glad I read this today. It just reaffirms what I know and believe.
My precious Daddy is always there,
blessings,
kingskid
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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I wish I had a six to give you. This story is so powerful and beautiful and just what a lot of people should read.
Its always good to be reminded of the fact that although we don't always understand, God does and He knows.
Your dialogue is excellent.
I'm so glad I read this today. It just reaffirms what I know and believe.
My precious Daddy is always there,
blessings,
kingskid
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Bless your heart. It's enough to read your words.
Thank you!
Jani
Comment from Judian James
Let me preface my review by saying I rarely, if ever, review religious pieces. I find that to be an area that is just too personal a place for me to go ... for me and you ... I have always been extremely private with my faith.
Now, with that being said, this is exqusite Jani. "God just smiled, and the warmth of His love wrapped around me like the softest quilt of down on a cold winter's dawn" This was written with your usual eloquence and grace.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Let me preface my review by saying I rarely, if ever, review religious pieces. I find that to be an area that is just too personal a place for me to go ... for me and you ... I have always been extremely private with my faith.
Now, with that being said, this is exqusite Jani. "God just smiled, and the warmth of His love wrapped around me like the softest quilt of down on a cold winter's dawn" This was written with your usual eloquence and grace.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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You are a true friend, dear Jude.
Hugs,
Jani
Comment from Kathy58
Janilou,This is a wonderful fictious spiritual story. I love to read this type of poetry. They send such a powerful message to the reader. Your story very nuch saddens me as i just lost my brother-in -law on Novemebr 2nd,2008. I also wrote a very spritual sort of poem about parts of his life. I am very proud of it. I have to believe that god is everywhere, or I would not be able to go on myself. So I try and pray every day now to keep in good touch,and have more and more faith, Thanks for sharing, kathy58
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Janilou,This is a wonderful fictious spiritual story. I love to read this type of poetry. They send such a powerful message to the reader. Your story very nuch saddens me as i just lost my brother-in -law on Novemebr 2nd,2008. I also wrote a very spritual sort of poem about parts of his life. I am very proud of it. I have to believe that god is everywhere, or I would not be able to go on myself. So I try and pray every day now to keep in good touch,and have more and more faith, Thanks for sharing, kathy58
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Many thanks!
Jani
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
This is beautiful, Janilou. I have just posted a poem along these lines and I have a few loved ones right now that could benefit from reading both. He is here and we just don't understand what our true spiritual resources are or where they lie.
Grace & peace,
Penny
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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This is beautiful, Janilou. I have just posted a poem along these lines and I have a few loved ones right now that could benefit from reading both. He is here and we just don't understand what our true spiritual resources are or where they lie.
Grace & peace,
Penny
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much, Penny. Although it has taken me eight months to respond, please know the stars and your comments mean just as much to me today.
Hugs,
Jani
Comment from Mark Nolan
A well written poem about my favourite subject. It is well constructed and from the writing it seems as though you have a relationship with God. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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A well written poem about my favourite subject. It is well constructed and from the writing it seems as though you have a relationship with God. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Many thanks!
Jani
Comment from Teri7
My friend this had to be an answer to prayer for me as well. I just wrote my faith poem which told of my uncle (who is the pastor) getting robbed Saturday. He is just getting over a stroke. Then we lost our lead guitar player in death the week before, but as you say He Is! Thank you for this my friend. I love you! Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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My friend this had to be an answer to prayer for me as well. I just wrote my faith poem which told of my uncle (who is the pastor) getting robbed Saturday. He is just getting over a stroke. Then we lost our lead guitar player in death the week before, but as you say He Is! Thank you for this my friend. I love you! Teri
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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I am so glad it helped. Bless your heart, Teri.
Hugs,
Jani
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Hugs
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Janilou:)
Thank you for once again remind me to always remember He Is. I can tell from your gentle words of faith that you are a true believer.
You create vivid memories of what it is like to know god and feel His love. I know you will share your faith with your friend and her children.
Roger
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Hi Janilou:)
Thank you for once again remind me to always remember He Is. I can tell from your gentle words of faith that you are a true believer.
You create vivid memories of what it is like to know god and feel His love. I know you will share your faith with your friend and her children.
Roger
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Thank you, Roger. Sometimes reviewers just don't get it, and it's refreshing to know that my purpose in writing this was appreciated.
Bless your heart.
Jani
Comment from babylonia
jani,
at first i wasn't going to read this one. but then i just wrote a scene where a fallen angel gave a woman to go in and heal a man's brain tumor and thought i better read. nicely done and i'm so sorry for the woman and her children. this has to be such a tragedy. sigh.
my prayers are with her.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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jani,
at first i wasn't going to read this one. but then i just wrote a scene where a fallen angel gave a woman to go in and heal a man's brain tumor and thought i better read. nicely done and i'm so sorry for the woman and her children. this has to be such a tragedy. sigh.
my prayers are with her.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Many thanks!
Jani
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jani,
you are welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from tati
Dear Janilou,
This is a very creative and nice story with an important message: that God will never leave us, that trusting God completely means having faith that He knows what is best for our life. I love the dialogues; they sound original and natural. My favorite part:
He understands your pain, He loves you, and He will never leave or forsake you. He is God.
Thank you for sharing. Wish you the very best, my dear friend. (tati, Nov. 18, 2009)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Dear Janilou,
This is a very creative and nice story with an important message: that God will never leave us, that trusting God completely means having faith that He knows what is best for our life. I love the dialogues; they sound original and natural. My favorite part:
He understands your pain, He loves you, and He will never leave or forsake you. He is God.
Thank you for sharing. Wish you the very best, my dear friend. (tati, Nov. 18, 2009)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Many thanks!
Jani
Comment from mrsmajor
I love poems that include the presence of Almighty God, especially when He visits.
I enjoyed this piece very much, and I am sorry to hear of the death of your friend.
Yes, indeed, He is always there when ever we need Him. He is a provider of comfort and Love always.
I saw nothing that needed changing in this very thoughtful piece. And no spag.
Thanks for sharing you wonderful visit with Our God.
May His Blessings follow you always, and to the family of your friend.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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I love poems that include the presence of Almighty God, especially when He visits.
I enjoyed this piece very much, and I am sorry to hear of the death of your friend.
Yes, indeed, He is always there when ever we need Him. He is a provider of comfort and Love always.
I saw nothing that needed changing in this very thoughtful piece. And no spag.
Thanks for sharing you wonderful visit with Our God.
May His Blessings follow you always, and to the family of your friend.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2010
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Many thanks!
Jani
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You're quite welcome, Jani, God Bless...
