This Easter Morn
Free Verse: Along a North Carolina woodland path97 total reviews
Comment from danielg29
I thought this was absolutely, exceptionally outstanding. If I can even put those words together. You have such great imagery in this poem it helps the reader connect to God right along with you. You describe such beauty you can feel the love in the words. I also like the honesty in the poem. You talk of how at times you have cursed him or forgotten him but then you remind us how even still he has not forgotten us. Thought the notes made a great story as well. Great Job.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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I thought this was absolutely, exceptionally outstanding. If I can even put those words together. You have such great imagery in this poem it helps the reader connect to God right along with you. You describe such beauty you can feel the love in the words. I also like the honesty in the poem. You talk of how at times you have cursed him or forgotten him but then you remind us how even still he has not forgotten us. Thought the notes made a great story as well. Great Job.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Hello Daniel! You can put together whatever words you would like to put together!!! Thank you for your wonderfully kind review. . . I am so humbled by all of the kind thoughts expressed. This offering has truly touched many people - more than I ever imagined it would!! take care. . . diane
Comment from jeaniep
What a great poem. I love the repeating phrase: I am no stranger to God.
Your poem flows very well and paints a magnificent picture.
Maybe I'm a little over emotional today, but this is the second time today, while reading poems, that tears have come to my eyes.
Again, a wonderful picture you have painted with words and I'm sorry for the bulldozed dogwoods. It's amazing how some things that may seem small to others mean the world to us.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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What a great poem. I love the repeating phrase: I am no stranger to God.
Your poem flows very well and paints a magnificent picture.
Maybe I'm a little over emotional today, but this is the second time today, while reading poems, that tears have come to my eyes.
Again, a wonderful picture you have painted with words and I'm sorry for the bulldozed dogwoods. It's amazing how some things that may seem small to others mean the world to us.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Hello jean! Thank you for your wonderfully kind review! This offering has made a number of folks come to tears; I never imagined it would have that effect on people! Take Care and Be Well. .. diane
Comment from Focused True North
Love your poem and love your A Notes. This is a soothing, uplifting work that brings hope to many ailing hearts that struggle in a difficult world. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Love your poem and love your A Notes. This is a soothing, uplifting work that brings hope to many ailing hearts that struggle in a difficult world. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Hello Friend! Thank you for your wonderful and kind review. I am amazed at how this offering has touched folks. . . never would I have imagined. . . Take Care...diane
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Lovely, it's snowing here .it was colorful and it had a good message and nice flow and good content, you have done a good job here .keep it up There 5 stars
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Lovely, it's snowing here .it was colorful and it had a good message and nice flow and good content, you have done a good job here .keep it up There 5 stars
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Hello Friend! I am sure it will stop snowing soon; it has to!!! Thank you for your kind review. . . diane
Comment from KalleeMerra
diane,
i had avoided reading this, too many Easter poems, too much church. I am so thankful I took the time to do it. this is magnificient! it is definately going in my bookcase.
blessings,
kallee merra
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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diane,
i had avoided reading this, too many Easter poems, too much church. I am so thankful I took the time to do it. this is magnificient! it is definately going in my bookcase.
blessings,
kallee merra
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2007
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Hello KalleeMerra (I love your name) thank you for your wonderfully kind review. I am deeply humbled by it. . . and I am honored that you would place it in your bookcase. . . Fondly, diane
Comment from Senyai
Beautiful, Diane. I wish your mother could have seen the dogwoods, too.... but then I think she could. :-)
Truly inspired poetry here, thank you for the uplifting view into your world. Easter has passed, but your poem filled in the missing link that my Easter didn't hold. I was too busy, and missed church, missed time to be thankful, missed giving thanks. missed thinking of the true meaning of Easter.
You filled that in for me. Thank you.
Foxey
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2007
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Beautiful, Diane. I wish your mother could have seen the dogwoods, too.... but then I think she could. :-)
Truly inspired poetry here, thank you for the uplifting view into your world. Easter has passed, but your poem filled in the missing link that my Easter didn't hold. I was too busy, and missed church, missed time to be thankful, missed giving thanks. missed thinking of the true meaning of Easter.
You filled that in for me. Thank you.
Foxey
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2007
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Hello foxey. . . am so pleased you enjoyed my offering and that it added to your Easter. . . diane
Comment from milushka
Thank you, Diane for the green poem, the landscape the trees the trip through the nature. I am still angry with Him for he already took everyone from me pops up unexpectedly, in old customs, in music in a waking up nature. I made myself a stranger.
Mila
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2007
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Thank you, Diane for the green poem, the landscape the trees the trip through the nature. I am still angry with Him for he already took everyone from me pops up unexpectedly, in old customs, in music in a waking up nature. I made myself a stranger.
Mila
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2007
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Hello! A little late replying. . . thank you for your kind and thoughtful revview. . .diane
Comment from davidray
I need not say anything, Diane. I have had the honor of reading quite a few poems in my lifetime, but this one is near, if not, at the top. Congratulations on this thing of beauty.
David
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2007
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I need not say anything, Diane. I have had the honor of reading quite a few poems in my lifetime, but this one is near, if not, at the top. Congratulations on this thing of beauty.
David
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2007
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Hello David! I am deeply honored and humbled by your kind and thoughtful review. . . I am so pleased you enjoy my offering. . . diane
Comment from Swtdreamz
blazing northern Michigan
sunset, - omg...tell me about it- I've seen some amazing sunsets and rises
Beside this unsuspecting
peaceful pathway,- petaled with light wishes
I am no stranger to God,
nor is He to me,- we've known him all our lives
good job
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2007
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blazing northern Michigan
sunset, - omg...tell me about it- I've seen some amazing sunsets and rises
Beside this unsuspecting
peaceful pathway,- petaled with light wishes
I am no stranger to God,
nor is He to me,- we've known him all our lives
good job
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2007
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Thank you! It was an amazing Easter. . . diane
Comment from judybonin
Well, this was quite an experience to read. the descriptions were awesome and i thought that the structure and spacing really put together an artful piece. very excellent read. Judy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2007
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Well, this was quite an experience to read. the descriptions were awesome and i thought that the structure and spacing really put together an artful piece. very excellent read. Judy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2007
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Hello Judy! I am deeply honored and humbled by your wonderful review. . . Thank you! diane
