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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "It's Party Time!"Little stories for children in rhyme
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Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the Children's Poetry contest, Sandra. This was definitely a delightful poem about a party that all the animals attended, even a band. This truly made me smile and even chuckle. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Wonderful pictures. Blessings, hugs n smiles.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the Children's Poetry contest, Sandra. This was definitely a delightful poem about a party that all the animals attended, even a band. This truly made me smile and even chuckle. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Wonderful pictures. Blessings, hugs n smiles.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Alie, I like a good party sometimes, lol. Thanks for coming, too, I'm glad you had some fun. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You are so very welcome, Sandra. Parties are always fun, blessings, hugs n smiles!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Couldn't help but wonder what the meat
eaters ate at the party? LOL That could
have been a little embarrassing for them
I would think.
This was fun though. Good Job , Sandra.
You do know how to entertain children
in books. XXX Nancy:)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Couldn't help but wonder what the meat
eaters ate at the party? LOL That could
have been a little embarrassing for them
I would think.
This was fun though. Good Job , Sandra.
You do know how to entertain children
in books. XXX Nancy:)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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No meat, just sweeties and fruit! LOL, trust you, Nancy!! Lol. You really had me laughing with this review. I'm glad you liked it, though, I'll make a point of saying the food is apple pie and jelly, in future. You are so funny!! Love you loads, my wonderful friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this children's poem contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. It made me think of a book I used to read to my first graders, 'Giraffes Can't Dance'. It's a cute book. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing this children's poem contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. It made me think of a book I used to read to my first graders, 'Giraffes Can't Dance'. It's a cute book. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, I haven't read that book, I'll check it out on Amazon. I'm glad you enjoyed this one, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from lancellot
Very nice bit of Fan fiction children's poetry. I like the light and cheerful tone. The rhyme scheme and language flow smoothly and feels easy enough for young kids to follow. And they will love the pictures you placed throughout.
Perfect work.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Very nice bit of Fan fiction children's poetry. I like the light and cheerful tone. The rhyme scheme and language flow smoothly and feels easy enough for young kids to follow. And they will love the pictures you placed throughout.
Perfect work.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much, Lance, I'm so pleased you enjoyed coming to the party. The golden star is really appreciated, Thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I admire poets who can write GREAT children's poems; I can't! Your narrative poem is full of happiness and joyful actions, sharing, and
partying. I especially like the end, confirming that kids ALWAYS clean up after themselves. Right--LOL!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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I admire poets who can write GREAT children's poems; I can't! Your narrative poem is full of happiness and joyful actions, sharing, and
partying. I especially like the end, confirming that kids ALWAYS clean up after themselves. Right--LOL!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Janice. You are the second one who seem to doubt the children clearing up! Lol, I can't understand it!! Thank you so much for the golden star, and the really lovely review. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from juliaSjames
You are fantastic at writing for children, Sandra.. This poem is no exception..Such a fun jolly write with the lion MC..You mention Madagascar in your author notes so I was looking for a mention of the lemurs. Perhaps you can squeeze them in. My grandkids adored the movies.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend. Hope you're feeling fine now.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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You are fantastic at writing for children, Sandra.. This poem is no exception..Such a fun jolly write with the lion MC..You mention Madagascar in your author notes so I was looking for a mention of the lemurs. Perhaps you can squeeze them in. My grandkids adored the movies.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend. Hope you're feeling fine now.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Aw, what a lovely thing to say, Julia, thank you so much. I never thought to use lemurs, I like them, too. I had them in my childrens ABC book. The name was of the illustration company, I should have put two and two together. I'll see what I can do, if not, they will be the stars of the next one. Thanks for the best of luck, wishes. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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Sandra, you're welcome. Happy to plant a seed in your fertile mind.
Blessings, Julia
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I enjoyed the fun and well illustrated poem!! But that last line got me laughing as I can just imagine you winking while saying that children everywhere "clean up all their mess." Adorable! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Lol! I enjoyed the fun and well illustrated poem!! But that last line got me laughing as I can just imagine you winking while saying that children everywhere "clean up all their mess." Adorable! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Yes, well if they are all like my sons were, it wasn't without some persuasion on my part to get them to tidy their mess up! Lol. Thank you, Helen. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the best wishes. :)) Sandra xx
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You were much more persuasive than I - I never succeeded!
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Ah, there you go, see, I have the use of magic which comes in handy at times. Lol. xx
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Comment from Anne Johnston
What a great entry for the Children's Poetry Contest. Rhyming is great and it all flows smoothly. So many sights and sounds as you describe the different animals. What a party and I like the last lines"
"And just like children everywhere,
they cleaned up all their mess! "
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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What a great entry for the Children's Poetry Contest. Rhyming is great and it all flows smoothly. So many sights and sounds as you describe the different animals. What a party and I like the last lines"
"And just like children everywhere,
they cleaned up all their mess! "
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Anne, for reading my children's poem, I'm glad you enjoyed the party! Thanks for such a lovely review. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) SAndra xx
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You are welcome, Sandra
Comment from karenina
This is a most inviting work, speaking to young and old! Imagine such diversity bans nary a slight or bias? We humans ought to sit up and take notice! BYOJ--
Bring
Your
Own
Joy!
A smikemaker!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This is a most inviting work, speaking to young and old! Imagine such diversity bans nary a slight or bias? We humans ought to sit up and take notice! BYOJ--
Bring
Your
Own
Joy!
A smikemaker!
Karenina
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Hi Karenina, thank you so much for the lovely comments on my children's poem. I'm glad you enjoyed coming to the party!! Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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My inner child jumped with glee!
Comment from Beck Fenton
What a rollicking good time! I'm back on Fan Story and so happy to read your poem! I've missed your creative writings. I am living in Vermont now, my original place of birth.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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What a rollicking good time! I'm back on Fan Story and so happy to read your poem! I've missed your creative writings. I am living in Vermont now, my original place of birth.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Aw, thank you, Beck, I'm so glad you enjoyed coming to my party! Thank you so much for the golden star, that was so sweet of you. It's lovely to have you back again. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
It must be nice to be back where you were born, I enjoy visiting mine too, it brings back so many lovely memories. xxx
