Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Seasons Greetings to you as well. This poetic form fits the Christmas feeling. "Mom busy spiking Dad's eggnog" is a great line and sounds like a good idea. There is a happy feeling in your poem that reminds the reader the joy of the season.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020

mermaids, thank you for all your contributions this year.

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

Well done. Very nice imagery. It created a strong picture of a Christmas scene in someone's home. We celebrate with our extended family on Christmas Eve, and I could see my family members in the characters of your poem.

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020

Leann, thank you for your time spent to read and comment on this poem.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I love the format of your poem, looks like a Christmas ornament:) The message is very clear get merry and forget any trouble:"Yuletide...
peppermint drops,
tree tops twinkling, sparkle
sugar plums, Christmas songs sung loud,
children laughing, their grandparents tearing,
mom busy spiking dad's eggnog,
warm fire glows in near hearth
I send greetings...
Yuletide!" Thank you for sharing and Merry Christmas:)

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020

Iza, Merry Christmas!