Hardship
An Acrostic- Loop Poem55 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Kahpot,
Your acrostic loop poem is creative and filled with opportunities for the reader to pause and reflect on hardship in her own life. I must admit that I haven't faced too many, and even when I did, early on in our marriage in terms of finding employment, I was so in love with my husband that my situation seemed minor compared to the hardships of so many.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Hello Kahpot,
Your acrostic loop poem is creative and filled with opportunities for the reader to pause and reflect on hardship in her own life. I must admit that I haven't faced too many, and even when I did, early on in our marriage in terms of finding employment, I was so in love with my husband that my situation seemed minor compared to the hardships of so many.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you Diane, yes some hard times are over shadowed by the good times, like you I wish this was for everyone, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. I can understand it. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. I can understand it. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your time and excellent review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Brilliantly done, Kahpot. You're the only one I know who writes these challenging acrostic loop poems. I especially liked "Deflated from life that's inhaled by shadows" and that you end with the first word. Yes, hardship is unavoidable in life and we have no control over it but we can still cling to Hope in God.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Brilliantly done, Kahpot. You're the only one I know who writes these challenging acrostic loop poems. I especially liked "Deflated from life that's inhaled by shadows" and that you end with the first word. Yes, hardship is unavoidable in life and we have no control over it but we can still cling to Hope in God.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and comments, yes for some reason I like this challenge, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel for anyone going through real hardship because I have not had that in my life and I have been lucky and blessed, but your poem outlines how living through hardship can darken people's lives and hope and being positive can lift spirits out of bad times, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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I feel for anyone going through real hardship because I have not had that in my life and I have been lucky and blessed, but your poem outlines how living through hardship can darken people's lives and hope and being positive can lift spirits out of bad times, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much Dolly, yes I think most have been through some hard times, positivity is the way out, as always much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Not only did I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,
I was captured by the words so seriously written with great meaning
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Not only did I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,
I was captured by the words so seriously written with great meaning
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for this excellent and inspiring review, along with six wonderful stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Your very welcome.
Cookie
Comment from dragonpoet
Great mix of the acrostic and loop poetry forms. It shows how life is circular and hope is always important. The picture reminds us that life is usually not clear.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Great mix of the acrostic and loop poetry forms. It shows how life is circular and hope is always important. The picture reminds us that life is usually not clear.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your encouraging comments and much appreciated six stars, many thanks****kahpot
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You are most kindly welcome, kahpot
Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem is excellent in every respect. It conveys a moving, message--one that is timeless and universal--about how hard challenges change a person and bury his/her ideals and aspirations. A great deal of poetic skill was employed to create this piece.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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This poem is excellent in every respect. It conveys a moving, message--one that is timeless and universal--about how hard challenges change a person and bury his/her ideals and aspirations. A great deal of poetic skill was employed to create this piece.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hardship
by kahpot
G'day mate,
I like your Acrostic- Loop Poem. It's a little somber. The presentation adds to the mood. I like it. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Hardship
by kahpot
G'day mate,
I like your Acrostic- Loop Poem. It's a little somber. The presentation adds to the mood. I like it. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your great review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sally Law
A loop poem is one of the hardest poetry forms there is, in my opinion. You did a splendid job with this, dear Kahpot. Wonderfully penned, illustrated, and formatted. Looks like the winner to me!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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A loop poem is one of the hardest poetry forms there is, in my opinion. You did a splendid job with this, dear Kahpot. Wonderfully penned, illustrated, and formatted. Looks like the winner to me!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments and review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent acrostic loop poem, I haven't written one of these one yet. Hardship is something that we have To seemingly endure our lot, but this is a great work my friend, it's very difficult to write one of these, so well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent acrostic loop poem, I haven't written one of these one yet. Hardship is something that we have To seemingly endure our lot, but this is a great work my friend, it's very difficult to write one of these, so well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you Roy, yes I think we all have had some hard times in life's journey, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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