Summer Rain
A Rondeau for Potlatch41 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Very picturesque description of the storm and its impact. Great word choices contribute to the visual effect. "Silv'ry sleeves is lovely imagery and add some excellent alliteration. I also like the pine needles lying in sodden sheaves. Your repeating line "no dribbling off the eaves" is excellent. Your rhyme is well done, and it reads smoothly. judi
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reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Very picturesque description of the storm and its impact. Great word choices contribute to the visual effect. "Silv'ry sleeves is lovely imagery and add some excellent alliteration. I also like the pine needles lying in sodden sheaves. Your repeating line "no dribbling off the eaves" is excellent. Your rhyme is well done, and it reads smoothly. judi
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Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Thank you, Judi. I appreciate that very much.
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You're very welcome. I enjoyed it. judi
