Butterfly Kisses
A poem in ballad measure46 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful six star poem in my eyes! You used such great descriptive words about all the colorful butterflies and the adorable picture of your little granddaughter! I enjoyed it very much! May God bless you! Teri
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This is a very beautiful six star poem in my eyes! You used such great descriptive words about all the colorful butterflies and the adorable picture of your little granddaughter! I enjoyed it very much! May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Many thanks, Teri, for dropping by to review and for your delightful comments and six star award. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from RodG
This is a wonderful poem that will appeal to children of all ages--I.e.--grandpas and grandmas with vivid imaginations. I love how you describe Teagan sending those butterflies aloft and how the Speaker and his wife get caught up in the game. I have played it, too, with my granddaughter. Whimsical and just a delight to read this snowy Sunday morning. As always, Tony, your meter is flawless and your rhymes are perfect. Thanks for sharing this. Rod
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a wonderful poem that will appeal to children of all ages--I.e.--grandpas and grandmas with vivid imaginations. I love how you describe Teagan sending those butterflies aloft and how the Speaker and his wife get caught up in the game. I have played it, too, with my granddaughter. Whimsical and just a delight to read this snowy Sunday morning. As always, Tony, your meter is flawless and your rhymes are perfect. Thanks for sharing this. Rod
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments, Rod. Thanks, too, for the six stars. Much appreciated! Teagan and I had a lot of fun together! It sounds as though you do with your granddaughter, as well! All the best, Tony
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Always a pleasure to read your poems. Rod
Comment from c_lucas
Winter is on the way out and Spring is just around the corner. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very colorful read.
winter
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Winter is on the way out and Spring is just around the corner. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very colorful read.
winter
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Many thanks, Charlie, for dropping by to review and for your comments. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
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You're welcome, Tony. Charlie
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello TFAWCUS: As a children's writer, I like your work here. I like your picture as well.
Little girls and butterflies go together like hand and glove. And then you speak of Grandpa's
love. This is a good poem for our children, as well as for us, their elders. This is the kind of writing that I was taught to do when I was a student at the Institute of Children's Literature.
It's the kind of writing that I love to do. I admire you, TFACUS. I admire your work too. Again; thank you for sharing. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Hello TFAWCUS: As a children's writer, I like your work here. I like your picture as well.
Little girls and butterflies go together like hand and glove. And then you speak of Grandpa's
love. This is a good poem for our children, as well as for us, their elders. This is the kind of writing that I was taught to do when I was a student at the Institute of Children's Literature.
It's the kind of writing that I love to do. I admire you, TFACUS. I admire your work too. Again; thank you for sharing. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Many thanks, rhonnie69, for dropping by to review and for your most affirming comments. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Wetbelly01
Neat little ballad here... Butterflys are so Cool!...
You're piece has a nice smooth rythym and ryhme to it...
Didn't come across any 'glitches' along the way...
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Neat little ballad here... Butterflys are so Cool!...
You're piece has a nice smooth rythym and ryhme to it...
Didn't come across any 'glitches' along the way...
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Many thanks, Wetbelly, for dropping by to review and for your comments. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. The butterflies formed a connection between grandpa and grandchild. Wherever butterflies gather they think about each other even when they are far apart.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. The butterflies formed a connection between grandpa and grandchild. Wherever butterflies gather they think about each other even when they are far apart.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Many thanks, Sandra, for dropping by to review and for your comments. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
