Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem for the club, DP. I like the smooth flow and the good rhymes. Your words are well thought out and descriptive.
Perhaps in your notes you could tell readers what the prompt was for that date.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading and reviewing.
In my portfolio, it states right beneath the poem that it is part of the Potlatch club and the date it was for. I write these all within the week they are first posted on the club page.
Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

A meaningful and message bound poem about a candle, well said and well done, good submission for the Potlatch poetry contest, wish you good luck. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Thanks for the nice review and the good luck wishes

dragonpoet

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Cute and clever. I like how you built up with the references to what it was. You listed many clues and it was fun to see you develop the narrative. Well done.

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review and all the stars.

dragonpoet