Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Very nice. I hope you get it for the price you want. Where's the grass? Oh, it's in the north. Now I get it. Love the trees and shrubs. What do Bernie and Howie think?

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Thomas;
We haven't taken the little guys over there to check it out yet. Reasonably sure they will LOVE having a full fenced yard.

~patty~

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Good for you. It's a lovely looking rancher, perfect from the outside, and if it has the items on your wish list then I wish you good luck.
I hope you can 'swoop in' and nab this one.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Me, too! Keep fingers crossed for me. We are going to tender our offer this evening.

~patty~

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Finger crossed from me too is that the real place it looks lovely I wish I lived somewhere warm but of course there are hurricanes which terrify me I hope you are safe and happy in your new home well done kind regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Meia;
Thank you so much. I know my nerves are going to get fried over the next few days - no one is ever quick enough for me. I have zero patience!!

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written six-word story. When we find the right house we immediately know it and we cannot settle for anything else. The same when we find the right partner.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Sandra;
Thank you so much. I am so excited, I'm having a hard time concentrating. Just glad I wrote the rest of my three-part series yesterday.

~patty~

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

This is a terrific club entry, Patty. It is so very exciting to get a new home, I will keep my fingers crossed for you, hope it all goes well. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Kerry;
Thank you so much. Hopefully, they will accept our offer immediately, and we can get going!

~patty~

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 16-Nov-2017

I hope so, Good luck, that would be a wonderful Christmas gift:)) a new home.

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I am excited for you! I hope things work out for you, and yours. The Author's notes say, "Flash Fiction," so I am not sure if this is true or not. But either way, you presented your desire in a wonderful way. In the six words, you got the message across so well, that as I say, I am excited for you. You said so much, and I especially like the second line which says, "All fingers crossed." The photo of the house is something I hope you get because it looks amazing. I'm crossing my fingers, as well, for you. I wish you the best of luck.
Take care, Jesse

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Jesse;
Yes, the picture is of the house. And, it is true -- just wanted to get the word out, and fulfill one of my club things.

I so appreciate your good wishes. I'm so excited, I'm not even worried about packing.

~patty~

reply by Jesse James Doty on 16-Nov-2017

Good for you! One thing at a time. Luck be with you!

Comment from sfharper

Excellent

Congratulations are in order for the narrator. This poem shows the excitement of finding a new home and sharing it with others. Great photo that goes with it. Enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading my little poem,

~patty~

reply by sfharper on 16-Nov-2017

You are welcome MustangPatty1029

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

One must look long and hard to find a suitable house. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi there;
Thank you so much for reading my little poem,

~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 16-Nov-2017

You're welcome, Patti. Charlie

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Patty,

How tremendously exciting! A new home is a fresh start -- new decorating opportunities and all new memories to begin creating together. What fun! I'm a little jealous - though I wouldn't give up my present home for any amount of money! hahaha! Good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Hi, Robyn;

I'm so excited, I'm not even stressing about the packing. We always hire guys to load and unload the truck, so I only have to pack and unpack boxes.

Pretty sure we won't make it in before the holidays - but I sure will have a great New Year to look forward to,

Thanks for your good wishes,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Is that the bungalow you're buying? It's lovely. All my fingers and toes are crossed for you, Patty. I don't envy you the move though. So stressful! Let us know if you get it. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Yes - that is the picture. I will let you guys know when our offer is accepted,

~patty~

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 16-Nov-2017

I'm keeping everything crossed for you, even my eyes! LOL.