Why Anansi Has Eight Thin Legs
Haiku (Please read author notes!)44 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Never heard of this fascinating story, so I was educated, clever well chosen words for your poem and unusual art work, best wishes Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Never heard of this fascinating story, so I was educated, clever well chosen words for your poem and unusual art work, best wishes Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Dear Dolly, thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is very cool, Jeni.
I love legends, myths, and folklore anyway, from countries all over the globe.
However, I'm not sure if you are aware of this, but the poem superimposed over your Anansi picture as a haiga is just a bit different from the one written below it.
So, I'll throw caution to the wind and simply exclaim, 'GREAT JOB!' for both, heh-heh...
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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This is very cool, Jeni.
I love legends, myths, and folklore anyway, from countries all over the globe.
However, I'm not sure if you are aware of this, but the poem superimposed over your Anansi picture as a haiga is just a bit different from the one written below it.
So, I'll throw caution to the wind and simply exclaim, 'GREAT JOB!' for both, heh-heh...
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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I THINK I've gotten it fixed now, teach...wanna take a look? I uploaded the wrong pic, darnit. See, I said darnit instead if damnit. I'm getting better at not cursing like a sailor.
I'm really glad that you liked this, though.
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Will do, Luna... :)
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YEAH!
Now we're cookin' with venom!
Much better, Jeni.
~Dean
Comment from mbroyles2
A great poem and I love the story that accompanied it. The crisp words fit the imagery quite well.
Really great stuff!
Michael
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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A great poem and I love the story that accompanied it. The crisp words fit the imagery quite well.
Really great stuff!
Michael
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Thanks, Mike, I'm happy that you enjoyed this.
Comment from robyn corum
Luna,
This was a double treat! I loved the fable in your author notes - thanks for that! The only question I have is why is your poem different in the image than in the text box? I don't know which one to review.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Luna,
This was a double treat! I loved the fable in your author notes - thanks for that! The only question I have is why is your poem different in the image than in the text box? I don't know which one to review.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2017
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Robyn, I made a mistake when uploading...take a look nowo, please, and make sure I have it properly fixed this time? Thanks in advance.
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perfect!
