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Poems by Michael

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Comment from Joan E.
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Your poem sounded autobiographical until I scrolled down to the picture at the end. Thank you for your tribute to Prince--what a loss at such a young age! Your references to the "guitar" and "purple" are perfect. Yes, "play princely forever"! Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    ahhaha...Hey J...-smile-
    c'mon somebody's got to keep it real around here...ahhaha....yea yea I can see the "obvious" resemblance myself, have for years actually...-shouldershrug-...damn shame nobody else does. you think I should try flyers...? ahhahaha love you Lady...Michael
reply by Joan E. on 21-Apr-2016
    Yep--flyers do get the word out! Thanks again for the rapid-fire tribute to a great talent. -J
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Michael,

You have written a very nice poem that I really enjoyed reading. You have always been great at writing poetry although some of the times I don't understand them. That's what happens when an old lady gets older. On the 29th of this month I'll turn 79 years old. I never knew I'd be around that long. LOL

It was nice to hear the song for once. Sometimes I can't. Thanks for sharing this with us.

You are still like my son, Mom Kat

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hi Mom...-smile-
    ah I enjoy expressing what I see in thought. yea well its me Mom...its not you...I write how I feel...lot of times that don't make sense...but I try to prove it real through my words. you're fine Mom...love you Michael
reply by MizKat on 22-Apr-2016
    You are so nice, Son. I'll try to read more of your work because it's nice to hear from you too. Love you, Mom
Comment from l.raven
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HI Michael, can't believe he is dead...so very young(57)....some of my favorite songs were...When Doves Cry...Purple Rain...and Kiss....he had a rough start in life...but he fought his way to fame...he was one of my favs and will always be...you nailed it with...Prince Of Wisdom...he could sing...entertain like no other...and he could play a guitar ...boy could he ever play a guitar...sill can't believe it...sigh...love your poem sweetie...and one of my favorite songs...Love you Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Thank you Daffodil...-smile-
    I've written before for his songs...just could never find one he allowed to be shown. It was pouring rain during this performance...the promoters where worried sick...went to him and said with wide eye'd fear of losing millions...its raining. and he said ..yes I know...they said what should we do...and he said...can you make it harder...ahhaha...what a guy. alright Dear...love you too. michael
reply by l.raven on 21-Apr-2016
    I tried to put him on my laptop...and they wouldn't let me...Kristy just said he was a part of her growing up...she is sad to hear he is dead...what a guy...so true...love back at ya...xxoo
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Great tributary to a great artist... RIP Prince

A couple of errors I wanted to point out:

Angle -Should be Angel dust?

crowded worlds need --world needs or world's need?

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    a Suz...-smile-....
    thank you for the corrections...I'm obviously not the best speller...although to be honest...I do it on purpose so I wont intimidate people...-smile-..ahhaha...big love Lady Michael