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Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from
Sasha
I am really getting pissed off at that agent. He is a rude, arrogant SOB as far as I am concerned. I eat prickly pear fruit all the time down here. It is delicious and packed full of vitamins and minerals. I prefer nopal cactus which is also called prickly pear cactus. I put it into just about everything. It is delicious too. Nice work with this one.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from
c_lucas
You have to be skill in cooking cacti. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
Thank you for the kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 21-Jun-2015
You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from
sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, Barbara, I will miss you while you're gone, but you deserve to have some downtime. I enjoyed reading this chapter. I only spotted one error.. should be they're here to arrest kurak instead of there's here to arrest kurak
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
You are correct and thank you for catching it. I will fix it.
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