Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I like that this is a short presentation. The picture sets the serious tone for this poem and assures you as a worthy entry for this contest. Your message sums up the meaning of Easter in few words, but with effective descriptive wording. You have the ability to make me feel like I am standing at the scene. I like your rhymes, they are subtle. Good luck to you in this contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Joy, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is a very timely and well worked out acrostic. It has a good flow to it as well which is not always easy with these.

Good luck in the competition.
GMG

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much GMG, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the contest .Easter theme is brought out very well .great choice of art work too.
All the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

This is a wonderful acrostic poem with a solid testimony of faith in our Savior's loving act of redemption.

Good rhyme scheme - a plus in an acrostic
Good use of enjambment.

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

Happy Easter!

Lena

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Lena, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Perfect poem acrostic for the Easter holidays. By dying that day for everyone, taking all our sins, and inviting us to live a life eternal in Heaven, Jesus saved us all. Excellent acrostic, good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Sandra, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Pancho Kid

Excellent

I reviewed this poem yesterday,without realizing it was an acrostic.......I can now see how carefully you have used your words within those restrictions. It really is very clever,unlike me! Thanks for explaining the reference.

Pancho Kid

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, thank you for the review. "As far as the east is from the west, he has removed my transgressions from me" Is a biblical reference from Psalm 103:12, which is geographical term for infinity,. This is the subject of the acrostic contest, so then, what is the reason for the four stars?

reply by Pancho Kid on 02-Apr-2015

Because I'm an idiot. I'll do another one, with a full confession....tomorrow.

Pancho Kid

reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

I never called you that, I was merely pointing out where the reference it came from! But I would never call anyone an idiot!

reply by Pancho Kid on 03-Apr-2015

Hi....no you didn't call me an idiot; I did that myself because I reviewed 2 'acrostics' yesterday, without realizing that the verses were written to those restrictions. I confess also that I didn't know what an acrostic poem was.....the other writer let me know about that, in a nicer way than I probably deserved. I'm going back to your work now, to change the rating, which,under the circumstances, was parsimonious and unfair......
Thanks, Pancho Kid

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015

That is incredibly gracious of you I thank and appreciate your generous heart, it is very kind of you, I hope we can be friends! Happy Easter,

reply by Pancho Kid on 03-Apr-2015

Sure no problem, even my nearest and dearest will tell you that I live with my foot in my mouth!
Pancho Kid

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015

Don't worry, I have been told the same, by mine, Roy.

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

Wonderful Acrostic entry here, telling a strong and powerful message in a few short words. John 3:16, my favorite bible verse since I was a small child. Thank you for sharing this inspirational message with all of us.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from madhatter1977

Excellent

A very cleverly written acrostic, Roy, with the true meaning of Easter expressed as a theme in so few lines! Really brilliant writing - I'm out of sixes but this would definitely be up there. Well done my friend and good luck in the contest, Pete :)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Pete, , for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

This is beautiful and so true. Stunning artwork depicting the reality, and clearly complements your work as well.

Great entry----good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Jackie, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

This is excellent. It tells the real story of Easter so succinctly, and truthfully.

I just wish more people accepted Easter for what it is, our salvation.

A very good reminder

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Bob, for this most wonderful review and comments.