Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from adewpearl
punctuated by single rifle shot - a single
love the conversation about snake LOL
good dialogue speculating about who Jim really is
it's interesting to see Jim's left out of the loop and how he doesn't like not knowing - turn about is fair play LOL
Brooke
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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punctuated by single rifle shot - a single
love the conversation about snake LOL
good dialogue speculating about who Jim really is
it's interesting to see Jim's left out of the loop and how he doesn't like not knowing - turn about is fair play LOL
Brooke
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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I answered this one. GRRRR, FS Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Jim is not having much of a choice in revealing himself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. A couple of minor things to look at. Good job.
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Drawing guns of bound prisoners would be a show of weakness.
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Jim chuckled. "I guess not." (Was she talking to Alec?)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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Jim is not having much of a choice in revealing himself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. A couple of minor things to look at. Good job.
Suggestions:
Drawing guns of bound prisoners would be a show of weakness.
Error
Jim chuckled. "I guess not." (Was she talking to Alec?)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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I answered this one. GRRRR, FS Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A very well written chapter. Flawless. I like verbal and none-verbal communication you employ with Soni. I would guess that a bad storm is coming and they need real cover.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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A very well written chapter. Flawless. I like verbal and none-verbal communication you employ with Soni. I would guess that a bad storm is coming and they need real cover.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Hi, good to see you back. How is your son doing? Good read. Only one suggestion...."The agent(')s arrived.
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"The agents have arrived.
Apologies if a repeat but I have an account for my wife's stories about our tro=ips now. Been getting some good suggestions we are now getting URL's added for more information on places we have visited. Check Tootsie55 sorry no rewards atm but I have more to add maybe later today. Couple of other projects first.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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Hi, good to see you back. How is your son doing? Good read. Only one suggestion...."The agent(')s arrived.
OR
"The agents have arrived.
Apologies if a repeat but I have an account for my wife's stories about our tro=ips now. Been getting some good suggestions we are now getting URL's added for more information on places we have visited. Check Tootsie55 sorry no rewards atm but I have more to add maybe later today. Couple of other projects first.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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Darn!!! I thought I fixed that. I am off to it again.
Comment from judiverse
Really worth six stars! Lots of excitement brewing, with the possibility of a storm and a mountain lion lurking. Soni has had a lot of challenges to face. Funny about how Midnight and Butkus get along. Both very determined to have their way. Soni shows her keen ability to sense when something is about to happen. There are still questions about Jim, but I guess information from comes only on a need-to-know basis. Good that Mack is still hanging in. judi
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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Really worth six stars! Lots of excitement brewing, with the possibility of a storm and a mountain lion lurking. Soni has had a lot of challenges to face. Funny about how Midnight and Butkus get along. Both very determined to have their way. Soni shows her keen ability to sense when something is about to happen. There are still questions about Jim, but I guess information from comes only on a need-to-know basis. Good that Mack is still hanging in. judi
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. YOU have to be my best fan.
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You're welcome. It's easy work. I love the story. judi
