Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Chapter Once; Part Cuatro"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from Sankey
Good work again. Was this a bit short this time? Was just getting into it! Thanks again only one little spag this time.
"I guess the plan i(s)t to play it by ear."
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Good work again. Was this a bit short this time? Was just getting into it! Thanks again only one little spag this time.
"I guess the plan i(s)t to play it by ear."
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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I have made that correction. Thank you for the help.
Comment from adewpearl
good use of dialogue to reveal more about their attitudes and personalities
I love how determined she is to rescue her horse despite his attempts to be more prudent
Come on, Midnight
I like how they admire each other's talent at shooting
strong verb choices add to the action and drama
Brooke
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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good use of dialogue to reveal more about their attitudes and personalities
I love how determined she is to rescue her horse despite his attempts to be more prudent
Come on, Midnight
I like how they admire each other's talent at shooting
strong verb choices add to the action and drama
Brooke
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your support.
